Hopes and dreams
My heart is torn to pieces, they laugh, they point, they stare.
I didn't do anything to deserve this, it definitely isn't fair.
You tell them all your secrets for them to only hear, but then the whole world knows it, it breaks me into tears.
I'm really sick of crying over nothing it seems, but to me its not nothing breaking my hopes and dreams.
A contest entry
- Poems! by Baba Jojo.
115 points, ended August 30, 2007, 16 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nice poem....Reminds me of something I had better forget.Its nice and simple....Good flow of words. Liked it. Good job!
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Nice poem, lots of emotion! Keep it up!
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this is a poem? the format is prose, the wordings seem prose....
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A very nice poem. There is a lot of emotion in these words, and it certainly flowed nicely as well. It may be only short, but I found it powerful and touching. Nicely done, good luck in the contest.
Welcome to Storywrite, I hope you have a great time on here.
x-FallenAngel-x
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