Dear my love,
I haven’t seen you in so long,
But you seemed to wish I wasn’t there.
I was invisible until you walked away,
Giving me a glance back.
If you were expecting me to follow, you should have told me so.
I didn’t feel welcomed to it.
I found you, but you walked away,
Leaving each time after my embrace.
You don’t want to let me go,
But I don’t feel I’m welcomed to stay.
I’m not just here so you aren’t alone,
But you don’t seem to be sure of your love.
I rub my hand along your arm.
You fingers are hesitant to lace,
Leaving hands palm on palm, no grip at all.
Your kiss doesn’t seem real.
Baby, make up your mind.
I can’t keep faking smiles.
And I can’t hold you forever.
What will ten months bring us?
Red roses or decaying daisies?
I guess, only tomorrow is to decide.
Love me.
A contest entry
- Dear You by Saej.
875 points, ended September 8, 2007, 27 entries
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Comments
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yes this is really deep in a way. im sure a lot of people can relate and that is sad, because its such a bad feeling. this was written so well! great work =]
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Oh my gosh. This is so sad and heartbreaking
It tells a story that many know well and others don't want to go through. You've put a lot of emotion in this. Great work >.<
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That's tragic. It was beautiful, and wonderfully written. The story it tells is one I think we all understand, and dread having to ever face it.
Great job! Thanks for entering my contest, and good luck with it.
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