Life
By Ayesha Raees
Like a forest, it grows
Animal lives so does the dreams
The leaves are hungry so are we
For sunlight, water, space and meat
Like a dog, it runs
Through the trees and busy streets
Have to work hard to feed a family
Until there is no home and then it collapse into its own misery
Like a sea, it crashes
Breaking the rocks while mending nothing
It carries on and on
With its own problems, rising…
Like a path, it’s separate
It’s never continuous, it always change
Its nor surprising not it’s strange
‘Cause it will either fall into a pit or climb a mountain range
Like a war, it’s hard never great
Some people loses while other wins
The graves hold a message
Of never repeating a mistake
Like a book, it’s unexpected
Day after day, page after page
The story goes on
Till the final chapter of the judgment day
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Poems! by Baba Jojo.
115 points, ended August 30, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Blue Chickes with Red Spiked Hair by LostSoulOfRage.
350 points, ended October 13, 2007, 20 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Poets Challenge (prewrites aloud) by Forgotten Anomaly.
300 points, ended November 1, 2007, 36 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A great peom. It is true, so true.
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nice work. its so tru and it made sense all the way
keep up the gud work! xox
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Nice Nice.... I really like it! These are true words on life.... Good Job!
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this was goos, some really good lines...some bad ones...the longer ones sounded so choppy and weird....others were astounding....
the message is goos, so is the ending...nice job, overall...some effort and it'll be better....especially love the page after page metaphor...
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