I am a lonely person,
needing comfort,
needing care,
wanting to live the life I dreamed,
for so long.1
I am a lonely person,
wanting family,
wanting friends,
wanting to be surrounded,
by the one's I love.2
I am a lonely person,
thinking of the life,
the life I want,
to be a part of,
for all eternity.3
I am a lonely person,
wanting to be free,
wanting to fly away,
from this world,
of reality and logic.4
I am a lonely person in this world.
A contest entry
- Poems! by Baba Jojo.
115 points, ended August 30, 2007, 18 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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You are right. Like a good friend of mine says a lot, "Reality bites." I get lost in my stories and other people's stories sometimes. I think my imagination has been one thing in my life that has kept me from feeling so lonely, another being my faith. Imagination and faith go hand in hand for me. I like what Paul the Apostle wrote, "What is seen is temporal. What is unseen is eternal."
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This was sad, but i relate. Very well done! Sort and to the point...clear meaning. Loved it!
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great poem and keep it up
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thank you!
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Awww. This is sad. I agree with SeleneStone, this is deep. I liked it though. It needs a background, you know, to make it have a better imagery. It looks plain this wy. Good job and keep up the good work!
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Very deep poem, my favorite kind
I really loved reading this one. My favorite types of poems are the ones that border in darkness or sadness. I guess because I can relate so much. Keep up the great work!
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thanks. I used to write poetry a lot. Now poetry inspiration comes rarely, but when it hits, i gotta write it down.
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this is good. i like it a lot.
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grmmatical errors...unneeded repetition, but over all, a very good poem...
i iked that it has a lot of potential! this was nice...
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