The full moon, hangs above my head.1
For me to fear of its light of chaos.2
To turn me into a beast of no meaning of this life.3
I, crave to be free, but the moon will still be there.4
To remind me of all that went wrong in my past.5
Why, does this beast pound me against the wall?6
What, is there left for me in this hole that I live in?7
Love, can I fall in love with you?8
Or will I, the true me, get in the way of the feelings?9
For, me there is nothing more to be with you.10
To save you from your own fears and bad dreams.11
To be there when no one else is.12
To be with you is all I want.13
But how can I say that I love you?14
Without, saying good-bye?15
Let, this moon be our own la-la bye.16
To hold you there under the stars.17
Also, to see your undying love.18
But, can you love a werewolf like me?19
I, don't understand how can a beast fall in love?20
But my heart tells me other wise.21
It tells me to be with you.22
Even though, the moon is high.23
I will protect you until I die.24
I see you in my mind.25
I see you in my dreams.26
I see you in my heart.27
I will howl for you when the sky is full.28
I will run for you when the winds blow.29
Lastly, I will fight for you
Author notes
Sorry, if this is not a story, but i wanted you to see how much that I liked Lupin.... I aslo wanted you to know that my imagition came to this.
Note Lupin is JK Rolling charater!
A contest entry
- Two easy options, really get creative ! :) by CelesteSanford.
100 points, ended September 3, 2007, 6 entries
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PERFECT
I'm DEFINANTLY not complaining it's not a story. I loved it. It had everything that I wanted in this contest....... AND you added Remus, I can't mark you down. The marauders are the best.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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A well written poem, great job. Good luck in the contest.
Sarah.
beginning: 3, language: 2, plot: 3, ending: 2, dialog: 3, characters: 2.
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OMG
This is wonderful! So much emotion, that's probably exactly how he feels! That is awesome.beginning: 5, language: 3, plot: 4, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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I liked this poem. It flowed really well and had an air of mystery about it. I'm not really sure what option this is for though. I think it may be for friday the 13th but im not sure. Anyway good luck!
language: 5, characters: 5.
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Good
It's alright, I like poetry a lot aswell
It was very cute, different than the others, and I liked how you put both an external and internal conflict.
The only thing else were a few spelling errors, so check them out and goodluck!
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This was good. Loaded with emotions.
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