The summer I met my *special* friends

It was the summer of 1997, my mum had taken me to our lodge in the woods. I remember it was a hot summer, clear blue skies and sunshine all day long. Mum had asked me to go to the shop just a short walk away, we needed bread and some milk, I didn't mind going, I loved to walk along the path from the lodge to the road, it was quiet and peaceful, and there was a beautiful stream which led to the sea.1

On the way back to the lodge, I thought I heard voices, children's voices, laughing and chatting excitedly, but there were no other children around, the lodge was very secluded, I must be hearing things I thought to myself, and carried on walking towards the stream. I heard the laughing again, louder this time, I stopped and listened, yes it was children's voices, but where could they be, I couldn't see anyone in the woodland, then I looked towards the water, and thats when I saw them, four children in the water, they looked to be having a tea party.2

I stood in the trees for a while, UN noticed, just watching them, then I saw it, well I thought I had, a fishes tail came out of the water, but I must have imagined it, because if I really did see it, then that meant these children were, mermaids and surely they didn't exist... Did they?3

I tried to be very quiet so they wouldn't notice me, but after just a few seconds the youngest of the children called to me,4

"Why are you hiding, come on out and talk to us, we promise we wont bite"5

I came out from behind the tree, I felt a little afraid, and also very excited, was I dreaming, was I really tucked up in my bed? I pinched myself just to make sure, Ouch, it hurt, so I guess that meant I was awake, this was no dream.6

"Come and join us, would you like a drink?" the girl who I thought had the mermaids tail asked. "Ermmm yesss, thank you" I managed to mumble. She held out her hand and passed me a cup, it had the most beautiful sweet tasting liquid in it, " Why don't you come in a join us, the water is so warm today" I took off my shoes and walked into the water, it did feel good. I think the young girl who first noticed me felt I was a little afraid, and she smiled, "We won't hurt you, honest, We have seen you lots of times but been too scared to show ourselves to you, but maybe now we can be friends"?7

I smiled and held out my hand, "I'm Nathaniel, pleased to meet you"8

I couldn't believe it, I had shook hands with a real live mermaid.9

To be continued if anyone likes this story,   10

Author notes

My first attempt at writing a Childrens story, not very good I know, that is why I will only add a new chapeter if people who read it enjoy it and ask for more
Take care and thanks for reading

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  • Anais Elaine
    December 6, 2004
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    Hey you cant do this to me, what exciting news? come on tell me

  • Silver Sionnach
    November 30, 2004
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    Wonderful, as always

    Oh Elaine! My Killian would have loved this to bits! He was always so high in the clouds...Now I find you have talents in writing stories! I cannot wait until this is published, for I'll be your first customer. Oh, I have some exciting news for you, but you'll have to be patient for I have to run. Beautifully written.
    ~Li

  • Anais Elaine
    September 3, 2004
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    Hi Purplerose
    Wouldnt it be lovely to meet a real live mermaid? I think I confuse everyone lol but for the wrong reasons.
    Thank you for your comment
    Take care because I care
    Elaine

  • Purplerose
    September 2, 2004
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    Great

    I have always wanted to meet a mermaid (or many )! While reading this story I thought that it might have been real, until I finished and realized that mermaids aren't real . I congragulate you on being able to confuse me! This was a wonderful story, I realyl like it! I think you should write a sequal, what happens to the narrator? Or the mermaids? I am really excited...fantastic job!
    Purplerose

  • Anais Elaine
    August 19, 2004
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    Hi Niky Thank you for reading and commenting on this story I dont think it is very good, but I fell in love with the pic so wrote about it.
    I remember days when it was safe to be in the woods alone too, I wish Nathaniel could grow up in a safe world like that.
    Take care
    Elaine


  • Nicolisis
    August 18, 2004
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    Wonderful Imagery

    I loved this Elaine. I like how you made Nathanial the storyteller (I bet he liked that!) I also love the picture, it's beautiful. Of course I want to read more - keep it coming it reminds me of a much happier time in my life, when I would go into the woods (when it was still safe to do so!) and dance and sing amougst the flowers, imagining I was dancing with the faeries. It really took me back to the happy place. Thanks Elaine I want more, I want to go there again!

  • Anais Elaine
    August 18, 2004
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    Awww Sandy thank you, you have just made my evening
    I will try and think what comes next lol,
    Thank you and take care
    Elaine

  • Sandygram
    August 18, 2004
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    A wonderful Message

    Yea , I want more too. This is so cute. Much happier then your last story. It is a refreshing change then most of the stories on here. I give it two thumbs up. Take care Sandy

  • Anais Elaine
    August 18, 2004
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    Aww Thank you Rowena Jo you are so kind

  • Wizzy Jo
    August 18, 2004
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    I ask for more lol please do another chapter this is sweet, I liek how they made friends in the end Id love to read on and see what happens with the mermaids and the little girl Good sotry and I like the picture at the top too
    Rowena Jo

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