Underneath It All

Different and yet the same.1

Underneath it all...2

I'm just like you.3

Even though my hair is dark4

Like the night sky.5

Your's is light6

Like the morning sun.7

My skin is black8

Like coal.9

Your's is white10

Like a ghost.11

But underneath it all...12

Underneath our skin13

We're the same.14

We both have15

Blood red as wine16

Pumping through our vains.17

We both have18

Brains to reason with19

Think for ourselves20

And form opinions.21

We're the same.22

Underneath it all...

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  • Yi Yin
    August 29, 2007

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    Underneith is wrong, it's underneath...
    WE SO NEED PEOPLE WHO THINK LIKE THAT!!! I'm sick and tired of listening to people talk about how different we are, when we are all same underneath. I love this poem's message.
    Good job!


    • crazygurl501
      August 30, 2007
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      THANKS

      yes i know thanks for the comment i enjoy your opinion thanks so much


  • Hug.Trees
    August 24, 2007
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    This is really good.
    And true. :]
    BTW, It's underneath (i think...).
    Good job!