The water ran down the man’s skin and washed away the dirt. But nothing could cleanse his sins.
His black hair dropped down to his shoulder. Only his eyes were darker then his hair, and his eyes were as black as his soul.
Never before was there a man so evil, never before a man so cruel. His heart was blacker than everything.
You said, "Hello!"
He said, "Fuck you, bitch!"
You said, "Bye!"
He said, "Suck my dick!"
And the thing that was blackest of all, perhaps the darkest of all things on the earth, was his mind.
The only things that swirl around in your head and heart and black words like 'Fuck' and 'Bitch' and all the evilest sayings ever.
Even the Devil found him too be too evil for Hell, and spat him out in the depths of blackness. Even he wishes to have nothing to do with The Black Man.
Author notes
Hope everyone likes it, it's just a little poem story I wrote up for a contest. Hope ya like it!
A contest entry
- Story starter...with big points by werner1221.
445 points, ended September 5, 2007, 7 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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not too shabby
It had an interesting idea to it.
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