A Forgetful Remembrance

The man sat across the room and swirled his brandy,
as the prostitute he had called sat memorizing
pictures in a photo album.
she was one of many,maybe hundreds
he had seen over the years,
each one had been tranced and would never remember
any details of anything he did or said.
She would remember nothing about him except that he was john.
"I'm finished.", she said staring blankly.
"good girl ,now you must remember to forget what you remember to do
when you see any of theses faces.
"yes,I understand"
"and what will you do ,when you see one?"
"DESTROY ALL HUMANS" she said without emotion
"good girl ,now forget to remember what you have forgotten until its time"
"I will snap my fingers 3 times and you will awaken
you will take your money from the dresser and leave"
The man removed the photo album and snapped his fingers 3 times
She awoke and stretched then walked over to the dresser and took
her money.
"Thanks john that was nice,give me a call when ever your back in town OK"
"Sure thing,Julie is it?I'll do that.",he said.
The door clicked shut and the man finished his brandy and thought
"the world needs a devil and I guess its me"
he laughed.
He poured another brandy and made a call
"hello Mary? oh frab jis fray kallu kallay."
"I understand" Mary said and hung up.
He waited 10 minutes and turned on the TV
Apparently some unknown bar tender had left work and gotten into
her car and smashed it into the bar killing 14 customers.
she was shooting it out with cops as he watched on the news.
he blew a kiss to the TV
"thats my girl " he laughed.



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  • Chemical Imbalance
    August 21, 2007

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    I liked this story...just not sure about how you formatted it. It was a bit distracting. I really like the idea of this though. Good job and thanks for entering the contest.