She looked the definition of sadness.
White tracks cut her face where tears dissolved skin to the bone. Little pools collected in her ears, for she lay on her side, shuddering as every rubber band promise that hald her together snapped.
Even her hair wept. Green turned blue with grief.
And sometimes she smiled, in a way that gave you hope, but it was only because she had felt the tears in her ears and realised that rhymed. As soon as she thought about the rhyme and its cause she flooded herself again with grief, a flushing toilet.
If you got to close she would drown you with it.
Streams of dissapointed blue hovered around looking to make more misery to be her company.
I hovered away, trying not to get dragged in. Trying not remember what made her cry
because I would rather be on the outside, describing what I look like, vaining fighting to lose myself in words, than feel.
And now the words have run out . . .
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More idea capturing, I know its not good, just got to keep the emotion alive.
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this is so cool
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Wow this is really emotional. It made me sad just reading it. I really loved this. There are is no single word I can use to sum this up. Just wow this was terrific.
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waah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That is the definition of sad
language: 5, ending: 5.
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