Running far away to a land unknown. Dwelt by no one except you. As you run into the silver fog you find no disturbances. 1
Reach out and feel the air’s serenity. Gentle breeze, almost soft, pass around you. Not a worry in the world. Is this the world? 2
Perfect Green grass- not a trace of brown. 3
Lush trees4
Sweet, plump fruit5
Nothing harming you just the clouds and the harmony that surrounds you.6
You hear noise- other then the hum of birds. A harp plays alone and proud. Ringing its threads just for you. Everything in this world is trying to please YOU. Are you dreaming? Maybe . . .Or maybe the world was destroyed while you were running away from world and you were the only survivor. Or maybe you are dead and trying to make sense of everything. 7
Look down to find yourself in a cream silky robe- made for royalty. The grass is soft like cotton. You sit and notice it’s soft feel and you lay down as though the entire ground were a King sized bed. Closing your eyes you feel warm. You see no darkness but see light. Feeling of peace takes over you. 8
All you wish as you drift of- I want to stay here forever. As you dream the world goes back to its normal state. Cars, mean people, building, darkness, cruelty, Death- everything back to the way it really is.9
Wake up and look around. Instead of lush grass is pavement. Instead of trees, tall buildings had taken their place. Instead of a clear puddle, dried blood. Instead of serenity you hear people screaming and shouting. This is life. And you guessed right- you were dreaming. Dreaming of a false reality. 10
Author notes
This was made to make you feel as though you were inside the short poem like story.
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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that's how i feel when i'm writing, it'sso weird that your beatiful peom is just like me. if you don't mind i would like to print it out and put it on my desk in my room.i bet everyone, and anyone who reads this peom will feel like they're sleeping on cotton like grass, and in a slik robe fit for a king. that's how i felt. i can;t wait to read the other 126 peoms you have writen. keep it up!!!
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This is really beautifull.. Really wakes us up to what we have done to this world. nice imagery at the beginning, and I love the jump back into the real world, it worked realy well.
Beautifull conclusion, really sums up what you were trying to say in thsi whole piece, exactly like conclusions should.
Very well done, thanks for sharing
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you do a wonderful job at putting in details and imagry. wonderful story

