Jimmy's Prespective Lover's Prelude chap 23

Chapter 23- Jimmy’s Perspective1

I just talked to Dianna online a few minutes ago.  She seems really excited about the prom. I can’t wait to see her in her dress.  I’ll bet that she’ll look so beautiful. Almost like a goddess. She told me that her mom is leary about  me taking her to the prom.  I can’t see why though.  I’m a pretty decent guy. I get good grades, don’t do drugs and hang around a  pretty good  group of friends.   But regardless  I’ll still go over to Dianna’s house Tuesday after school to talk to her mom so she’ll feel  a little bit more comfortable and trusting of me. 2

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  • Samplette
    February 18, 2005
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    The same thing goes here as the last chapter and one or two other of Jimmy's perspective. Is he also writting in a journal? I know the first time you had him talking to friends about her...Just wondering..
    S♥m


  • InvisibleKitty
    October 5, 2004
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    i need to know more what happens next does the prom totally bomb cuz i no it did when i went to the junior prom wit some kid when i was in 9th i need to know what happens next ahhh.

    ~visi~


  • ---Laura---
    September 3, 2004
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    Brilliant keep it up, can't wait to see what happens next!!! love it so far btw.

    Alydia

  • chat noir
    August 17, 2004
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    i think you mean PROspective.

    cute write,
    -kiera