Lover's Prelude- Chapter 22

Chapter 22- Mrs. Rivers’s Perspective1

A young man named  Jimmy  Richards has asked Dianna to the prom. I feel a little awkward because   I barely  know  him. Dianna insists  he’s a nice  boy but he’s  in a rock band, and for reason I associate drinking  with rock bands.  Dianna has agreed to bring him by after school  and introduce me to  him.  Maybe once  I meet  him  I’ll feel a little less awkward about her going to the prom with him.   I just worry that she’ll get taken advantage of by boys  that are older than her.    Maybe  meeting  him  will relieve at least some of my fears. 2

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Mrs. River's prespective

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  • Samplette
    February 18, 2005
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    IS there a Mr. Rivers? I can't remember her daddy being mentioned...I feel you need to make this come off as her thoughts, and let the reader know that, or have her talking to Diannas daddy or a friend....just a thought...
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