Great,what an absolutely great situation to be in, Kimberly thought. Silently berating her idiocy.
She had been looking forward to this trip her cousin said he’d take her on for moths, since he first suggested she might like to come when at a family reunion he found out that she had a motor bike. Kimberly hadn’t thought to ask who his friends were, she’d assumed as they were all men in there 20's & lived in Toowoomba, that as a 17 year old who lived in the middle of nowhere, she wouldn’t know them.
So far it had been fine. But Kimberly knew, as she always sensed when she done something stupid, this was one of those times she was going to end up in hot water.
At present she was sitting astride her beloved Suzuki GSX250. In front of her rode her cousin on his own machine & in front of him was one friend Kimberly didn’t know. Riding behind Kimberly were four other men all on their own bikes, two of which, unbeknownst to her cousin & each other, admired knew. In this order they’d decided to ride to avoid confusion by having 1 leader.
So in order from the front rode Michael {a friend of Daniels}, Blake {Kim’s cousin}, Kimberly, Daniel {a friend Blake’s from his work}, Matthew {a guy from Michael’s work & Jolene’s brother who was Kim’s age & her best friend}, Ryan {a friend of Matt’s who Jolene used to have a crush on from when he’d stayed at her house ova weekends that Matt had come down for. Jolene had given Kim his number & they’d text silly with him one boring English lesson, however Kim had continued to text him after that class when they’d finally told him who it was & Jolene had sworn she could never look at him again. It eventually got kinky till one night they hooked up after a show Kim had went to in Toowoomba}. Bring up the rear was another friend of Blake’s, Josh.
It was late in the morning on this bright Saturday & they were just about to start up the north side Mt Tambourine, where they’d set up tents in the camping ground & have lunch before heading out to ride the afternoon away.
When they got to the grounds they set up their site. A fire in the middle with rocks as a boarder & tents set round the edge.
They each had small individual tents & Kimberly set hers up on 1 side of the site on the edge of some trees. Discreetly distanced from the mens tents which noone commented on.
When she had finished, just as she was about to come out someone come in. Kimberly nearly had a heart attack as she immediately thought it was Matt, but it was Ryan & she smiled as he came over. “You Know”, He said slowly when he stood right in front of her, all but touching her. I thought you really didn’t recognize me when Blake introduced us. You’re a real good actor.”
“Your not bad yourself, you caught on pretty quick.”
“Yeah well I figured it’d be better if people didn’t know we’d meet before, especially with Matt there. He seemed pretty put out when he found out we were texting each other. I also figured if you really didn’t recognize me I could always remind you later.” at this he put his arms round her & pulled her body into complete contact with his & bent his head to kiss her just like he had that night in Toowoomba, warm & gently exploring that set her whole body tingling. Kimberly let a moan out & as soon as her lips opened Ryan’s tounge slipped in searching the delicious warmth of her to duel with his tounge & draw it into his mouth to suck & nibble. During this his hand drifted over her back. but now as he withdrew his lips from hers & traveled across her face in little kisses to her ear & Kimberly lent her head to one side as Ryan kissed her neck, his hand proceeded round her front & up in her shirt to stroke her breast.
His mouth back at her ear he whispered, “You know I actually come tell you lunch is ready. I thought it would be the perfect opportunity to speak to you alone.” he continued to nibble her ear as slowly let his hand fall out of her shirt.” You right to come out babe.”
“Oh, yeah, um just give me a sec.” Kimberly said breathlessly & stepped out of his embrace & turned away just in because immediately Blake come in.
“Is something wrong we’re all ready you’ll miss lunch if you don’t.” He looked from Ryan to Kimberly & back again.
Kimberly turned with a big smile & spoke before Ryan could, “ I was just looking for my other water bottle,” She waved the bottle in her hand that she hadn’t lost, “I’ve got it now. The one on my bike’s empty.”
Blake smiled & shook his head, “I don’t know How you can drink with a helmet on goin 100 k’s.”
“I’m just good”. She laughed as she walked out.
They all chatted amiably while they ate except neither Matt or Ryan spoke directly to her. Ryan seemed unable to mask the anticipation in his eyes while they frequently perused her body, regardless of who was watching. Matt preferring to cast suspicious glances her way when he thought noone was looking.
Finally, much to Kimberly’s relief they set off, roaming the mountain.
However the thrill of being on the road with her adored bike wasn’t enough to stop the nauseous feeling in her stomach from taking over, both from fear & excitement. Fear of what Matt might do & excitement at what she hoped to achieve with Ryan. She also had a terrible dread of Blake figuring out what she’s really like & it in getting back to her mother.
Tonight, she thought as they pulled up to their campsite just after dark. Tonight she fully intended to lose her virginity to Ryan. Because despite not knowing he would be there she fully intended to take advantage of the fact that they were both up on that mountain miles away from stern parental eyes.
After a simple meal cooked on the fire & a few hours of chatting & joking & laughing & general mucking around they all turned in for the night.
Kimberly changed into her Pj’s & settled down. Then got out her phone & opened the fold. On the screen it said. “1 NEW MESSAGE” Wow that was quick, usually Ryan was a slow texter. She pressed Show & sure enough {as she’d known} it was from Ryan;
freaky so am I a
guy from Matts work
michael or somethin
invited us maybe we
could meet up at night
wen no1 round if our
campsite not 2 far apart
it was from this morning. Kimberly had sent him an excited text about what she was doing. He must have sent that just before they set off meaning Kimberly was already on the road, as she lived furthest from the allocated meeting place.
Oh well, she closed that & wrote a new text;
Hey sxy u think u
can sneak away from
ur group cos I no I
can luv me
She sent that & laid back. Ryan & her always played silly games & she couldn’t wait to see his reply.
She heard someone outside the tent & was slightly disappointed because it was fun & heightens the anticipation. But she could see that he didn’t want to wait any longer.
Yet as a hand reached & opened the flap of the tent it wasn’t Ryan who stepped into her tent but Matt.
Kimberly’s heart gave lurch & she sat bolt upright.
To be continued...
She had been looking forward to this trip her cousin said he’d take her on for moths, since he first suggested she might like to come when at a family reunion he found out that she had a motor bike. Kimberly hadn’t thought to ask who his friends were, she’d assumed as they were all men in there 20's & lived in Toowoomba, that as a 17 year old who lived in the middle of nowhere, she wouldn’t know them.
So far it had been fine. But Kimberly knew, as she always sensed when she done something stupid, this was one of those times she was going to end up in hot water.
At present she was sitting astride her beloved Suzuki GSX250. In front of her rode her cousin on his own machine & in front of him was one friend Kimberly didn’t know. Riding behind Kimberly were four other men all on their own bikes, two of which, unbeknownst to her cousin & each other, admired knew. In this order they’d decided to ride to avoid confusion by having 1 leader.
So in order from the front rode Michael {a friend of Daniels}, Blake {Kim’s cousin}, Kimberly, Daniel {a friend Blake’s from his work}, Matthew {a guy from Michael’s work & Jolene’s brother who was Kim’s age & her best friend}, Ryan {a friend of Matt’s who Jolene used to have a crush on from when he’d stayed at her house ova weekends that Matt had come down for. Jolene had given Kim his number & they’d text silly with him one boring English lesson, however Kim had continued to text him after that class when they’d finally told him who it was & Jolene had sworn she could never look at him again. It eventually got kinky till one night they hooked up after a show Kim had went to in Toowoomba}. Bring up the rear was another friend of Blake’s, Josh.
It was late in the morning on this bright Saturday & they were just about to start up the north side Mt Tambourine, where they’d set up tents in the camping ground & have lunch before heading out to ride the afternoon away.
When they got to the grounds they set up their site. A fire in the middle with rocks as a boarder & tents set round the edge.
They each had small individual tents & Kimberly set hers up on 1 side of the site on the edge of some trees. Discreetly distanced from the mens tents which noone commented on.
When she had finished, just as she was about to come out someone come in. Kimberly nearly had a heart attack as she immediately thought it was Matt, but it was Ryan & she smiled as he came over. “You Know”, He said slowly when he stood right in front of her, all but touching her. I thought you really didn’t recognize me when Blake introduced us. You’re a real good actor.”
“Your not bad yourself, you caught on pretty quick.”
“Yeah well I figured it’d be better if people didn’t know we’d meet before, especially with Matt there. He seemed pretty put out when he found out we were texting each other. I also figured if you really didn’t recognize me I could always remind you later.” at this he put his arms round her & pulled her body into complete contact with his & bent his head to kiss her just like he had that night in Toowoomba, warm & gently exploring that set her whole body tingling. Kimberly let a moan out & as soon as her lips opened Ryan’s tounge slipped in searching the delicious warmth of her to duel with his tounge & draw it into his mouth to suck & nibble. During this his hand drifted over her back. but now as he withdrew his lips from hers & traveled across her face in little kisses to her ear & Kimberly lent her head to one side as Ryan kissed her neck, his hand proceeded round her front & up in her shirt to stroke her breast.
His mouth back at her ear he whispered, “You know I actually come tell you lunch is ready. I thought it would be the perfect opportunity to speak to you alone.” he continued to nibble her ear as slowly let his hand fall out of her shirt.” You right to come out babe.”
“Oh, yeah, um just give me a sec.” Kimberly said breathlessly & stepped out of his embrace & turned away just in because immediately Blake come in.
“Is something wrong we’re all ready you’ll miss lunch if you don’t.” He looked from Ryan to Kimberly & back again.
Kimberly turned with a big smile & spoke before Ryan could, “ I was just looking for my other water bottle,” She waved the bottle in her hand that she hadn’t lost, “I’ve got it now. The one on my bike’s empty.”
Blake smiled & shook his head, “I don’t know How you can drink with a helmet on goin 100 k’s.”
“I’m just good”. She laughed as she walked out.
They all chatted amiably while they ate except neither Matt or Ryan spoke directly to her. Ryan seemed unable to mask the anticipation in his eyes while they frequently perused her body, regardless of who was watching. Matt preferring to cast suspicious glances her way when he thought noone was looking.
Finally, much to Kimberly’s relief they set off, roaming the mountain.
However the thrill of being on the road with her adored bike wasn’t enough to stop the nauseous feeling in her stomach from taking over, both from fear & excitement. Fear of what Matt might do & excitement at what she hoped to achieve with Ryan. She also had a terrible dread of Blake figuring out what she’s really like & it in getting back to her mother.
Tonight, she thought as they pulled up to their campsite just after dark. Tonight she fully intended to lose her virginity to Ryan. Because despite not knowing he would be there she fully intended to take advantage of the fact that they were both up on that mountain miles away from stern parental eyes.
After a simple meal cooked on the fire & a few hours of chatting & joking & laughing & general mucking around they all turned in for the night.
Kimberly changed into her Pj’s & settled down. Then got out her phone & opened the fold. On the screen it said. “1 NEW MESSAGE” Wow that was quick, usually Ryan was a slow texter. She pressed Show & sure enough {as she’d known} it was from Ryan;
freaky so am I a
guy from Matts work
michael or somethin
invited us maybe we
could meet up at night
wen no1 round if our
campsite not 2 far apart
it was from this morning. Kimberly had sent him an excited text about what she was doing. He must have sent that just before they set off meaning Kimberly was already on the road, as she lived furthest from the allocated meeting place.
Oh well, she closed that & wrote a new text;
Hey sxy u think u
can sneak away from
ur group cos I no I
can luv me
She sent that & laid back. Ryan & her always played silly games & she couldn’t wait to see his reply.
She heard someone outside the tent & was slightly disappointed because it was fun & heightens the anticipation. But she could see that he didn’t want to wait any longer.
Yet as a hand reached & opened the flap of the tent it wasn’t Ryan who stepped into her tent but Matt.
Kimberly’s heart gave lurch & she sat bolt upright.
To be continued...
Author notes
This is the first story I've written that I actually think I'l finish so be nice I'm not real good with spelling, structure & gramma so any help is apprciated
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i like it u need to finish
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Good Flow
Nice feel with your text keep on the bike you got a wind a blowng round you and you keep writing with the wind to your back. good thoughts Annie
beginning: 3, language: 4, plot: 3, ending: 1, dialog: 3, characters: 3.
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thanx annie much appreciated hope u like the rest
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