You can have it in the plam of your hand.You can take it in.You can live with it.You can do so much with it.You can't keep it stuck in a pin,cell,a room, or a cage.It with break free once and a while,It will tear you apart until you release it to a new world!That is the power...THE POWER OF LOVE!You can't hide it.Who'd ya think you're kidding?
He's the earth and heaven to ya
Try to keep it hidden, honey we can see right through ya
Girl ya can't conceal it
We know how you're feelin', who you're thinking of.
Why deny it, It's too...cliché = (CLEE-SHAY)
The power of love!Stay true to the beat of your heart!
Please tell me what you think
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wow that was good!!! keep up the good writing!!!! hehe
<3
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short and simple but right down the right pathway P good work love
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This is cute I like it6
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Awesome! You rock!
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All of you rock with me!
Thanks for the comments guys and girls!
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I really REALLY loved it! But in the end it started to sound a bit weird...but i still REALLY liked it!
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WOW!!!! Nice
But isnt part of that poem a Cheetah Girls song off one of those Disney Mainia albums?
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kinda
Yeah sort of.
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awesome
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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thank ya
Thnx for commenting!
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Yay!! how touching i love it.
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^^ sweet- simple and well coool as my mumma's chocolate collection ^^ yumm
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lols. Love it so much. CAN'T HIDE LOVE!! EVER EVER EVER!!
Oh dear...does that mean the guy I love knows? o.0 -
I am sorry
I AM SORRY BUT I ROCK!!!!!KURAI YUME, AYA UCHIHA, AND GREEN KAT ROCK WITH ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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What about me? *cries*
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Yup
Yup you rock with us!
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Who'd ya think you're kidding?
i lova this!!! great job!!!!!!!!!
much luv~
kitty
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LUV YA
I L Y!YOU ROCK OUT LOUD!
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