Do you love me?

'My dear do you love me?, 1



and is it true?2



If I dared ask, would you3



Say you love me too?'4



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'My dear young darling,6



Yes, I would.7



I if I tried, I could8



Not stop at all my darling.'9





'Monsieur, mon amour vrai,10



is not our love cast out by11



the beauty of this day?'12



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'Perhaps the imagination14



controls the mind and 15



percieves more when16



it is shadowed by love,17



not the sun.' 18



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'My dear do you love me?, 20



and is it true?21



If I dared ask, would you22



Say you love me too?'23



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'My dear young darling,25



Yes, I would.26



I if I tried, I could27



Not stop at all my darling.'28



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  • sarahhitch
    August 21, 2007

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    This is a great written poem and a pleasure to read this for you.

    One thing I wonder though is why all the large spaces between each line?

    Sarah


  • Frozen Angel
    August 19, 2007

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    What does the line: "'Monsieur, mon amour vrai," mean? I think this is a simple and sweet poem, keep on writing!

    *Frozen Angel*