My Burning Words

These words are burning from my heart, 1

Leaving scorched marks all over, 2

Buring me up. 3

But no nooo, 4

I can't say themmm. 5

How hard I try, 6

My world isn't comming back, 7

An impossible dream, 8

Close enough to see, 9

But to far to touch..... 10

Pain, suffering, the world is gone. 11

Death, murder, lies, they hurt. 12

Every word is used against me, a double sided sword. 13

I can't stop it, 14

Its too late. 15

All humans are doomed for all we care, 16

Never show compassion, 17

Thats what we are taught. 18

Taught to drink, swear, and smoke. 19

An impossible dream, 20

Close enough to see, 21

But to far to touch. 22

Writen in diarys, screamed from my lungs. 23

I screwed up. 24

Pain, suffering, the world is gone. 25

Death, murder, lies, they hurt. 26

Every word is used against me, a double sided sword. 27

Why didn't we learn? 28

Why didn't we see? 29

Why didn't someone warn us? 30

But your gone, and we are left. 31

The damn future generation is us. 32

We took the guns, and went. 33

Not caring who might get hurt. 34

Now we pay. 35

We couldn't run. 36

I screwed up. 37

Bang, BANG, BANG! 38

Three ringing shots. 39

Echoing throughout the town. 40

I can't flee. 41

I am fixed on the blood. 42

Oozing from the small wounds I had inflicted. 43

Pain, suffering, the world is gone. 44

Death, murder, lies, they hurt. 45

Every word is used against me, a double sided sword. 46

There is nothing of me left. 47

Let me die. 48

I don't care. 49

My life is screwed up. 50

An impossible dream, 51

Close enough to see, 52

But to far to touch. 53

An impossible dream... 54

An impossible dream... 55

An impossible..... 56

Dream......

A contest entry

Not the best of all songs, more like a poem but not...

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  • Dreams of Insanity
    September 2, 2007
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    WOW! This one is soooo good! I really liked this so great! Bravo!


    • perfect paradox
      September 2, 2007
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      Thank you

      Wow, it was more of a poem that got turned into something in the middle of a poem and a song.
      More of a pong...


  • karmaxandxcrayons
    August 23, 2007
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    wahoooo

    yayyyy!!! Lee-san!! or is it Li-san.....? well anyways, Maureen loves. LOVES. and ANYWAYS, whats that new story u were talkin' about, hmmm??? and why does it seem like you are ALWAYS online???

    Grabell
    PS: I will start signing my notes "Bell"...

    Bell

    beginning: 5, language: 5, ending: 5.


  • ArtificialSweetener
    August 18, 2007

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    Hmmmm...

    I like this song but wait a sec, I need to read it again...

    Ahhhh, ok, well first I need to say great describing words

    This song really moved me!

    I don't have anything else to say really!

    Good Luck!

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