• My love the place that I’m going
I don’t want to take you with me
You are made not for pain
Your heart is not to bleed and stain
• My path is bumpy and rough
The road stretches long and tough
Tears fall like hail from the skies
Eyes flood and drown in cries
• My heart so wounded and sick
Surrounded with spike and prick
You have a lifelong road up ahead
But mine is already tainted and dead
• Love has never given to me
I don’t even deserve the love of thee
You had me in when I was down and pale
You held me tight even when I went to wail
• An ill heart like mine
To you was fair and fine
But I drag you all along
Forcing me to stay strong
• My joy has gone
Happiness has foregone
I don’t you to drag you with me
I want you to be like birds so free
• You deserve not a dead boy
That has no life even joy
You deserve a mighty knight
Keeping your love so bright
• But I have my road to death
Slowly I lose my breath
Now I stand here
Tomorrow I maybe gone
That’s my fear
• You have a love to give
And a life to live
Intruders inside me kill me
That’s why I don’t want to take thee
To the places that I will soon see
I know not when comes my call
And I drop wither die and fall
Author notes
ESPECIALLY TO LADYMADELINE I HOPE U UNDERSTAND ME
Please tell me what you think
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Sad. BUt it's very strong and powerful 
But never give up! Lifes a test Giving up is the way you fail it. But if you keep going strong with the people that support you to help you and talk to in your time of need you can make it. I'm always here for you too. Don't forget that You've got talent so spread it
~Blackwings <3
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A sad write. It is somewhat depressing and I think that's what you wanted the reader to feel. If this is truly how you feel, I hope that you hang in there. I can tell you that it will get better. You have a nice talent for writing. Keep it up.
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Big brother, is this how you really feel? Don't be sad if it is! I love you love you love you soooooo sooo much! *hugs Pete* Don't be sad anymore I would capture the sun and stars all in the jar just to return your happiness!
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Hey Peter!!
Okay... Sixth Stanza, third line. there's something missing...
Well well well... nice poem! I loved the rhyme. Well done!
See ya
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This is very touchin... It was sad (emotionally hehe) I really like this poem... telling a loved one that you can't hurt her/him. Really good!
Awesom job!
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I hope you don't die. This is really sad but nicely written. I think she does understand.
Please stay safe.
s for ages
Emma.
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Pete stay strong. I will always be there, wishing you well and loving you from afar. Even if you give up, I never will.
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it is sad
Well.....it.....sad........but....I like it i just don't like how it is sad
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sad poem
Was he dieing or just dieing inside? It was definitely sad and depressing.
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