in the gym troy was playing basket ball and he did a jump shot and landed wrong he sprang is ankle and had to go to the hospital! they went to the hospital because the nurse couldn't do x-ray's.
so his dad the coach of the team headed to the hospital.
Once they got there they found out one of his bones got chiped. and he went to East High on cruches.
gabbriella saw him and had to ask what happened. She awfered her help to troy. because when your on cruches you cant really do anything. so he took it. she said that they can't do the spring musical that year.
the end of that idea to try out but. time to start over. the end of the school year is coming. are you going to volenteer at the golf club again? maybe i don't think so now this happened. that's not an option. i'm shure i cant put any wheight on this for maybe half a year. this hapened before to me. i broke one of my arm's. that's not good. you won't be able to do basketball all next year! that's horable!
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Um.....what? Confusing...a bit. o.O But, its pretty cool.
No offense: but I am only ten and you are 16 (as you say) and I already know how to write with big words and that stuff. Is that normal???
PS: Tragic without k. XD good story
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A bit confusing...so, maybe I could help you out. I'll call you and possibly I can come over and help.
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Keep Trying!
I think that this was in the Best Friends catercory? Well anyway this has quite a few spelling mistakes, the site does have a spell check on it but oh well.
I really like the idea of a High School Musical option's but this isn't much of a story.
Maybe you could make it into chapters?
I also noticed that no-one speaks in this, is it meant to be like that?
Good Try.
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