The ring on my finger,
Once meant a bond,
Until I met a woman
To whom I was fond.
Our bodies close
A kiss so tender.
So this is it,
An unknown splendor.
A secret to keep,
A mishappened love.
My own little heaven
Sent down from above.
No one was to know,
We were never to be spotted.
My husband, he found us,
Such a thing was never plotted.
Author notes
Sort of a mess, but oh well
A contest entry
- Sugary Sappy Lovey Dovey Affection by plurangel.
200 points, ended August 22, 2007, 14 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me what you think, please
Comments
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aww! this was so sweet and unexpected! wonderful tone!
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wow i was not expecting the ending. a lot of drama in very little words. CONGRATS on that
! I also liked how you introduced love for the characters husband right away, i'll say i had a different impression of how this poem was going to go. good job and goodluck in my contest.
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Great!
Wow, really good!
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 4, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 3.
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lol, cute.
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