The Weird Worlds of Alli, Kasey and I (part 6)

Amanda and Rex were walking along the corridor, still thinking Norbert and I were still behind them. They looked back and of course saw Mr. Haggan, Amanda screamed, because just as they tunred around he turned into Bob. "Oh Rex, look at how pretty he is again." She said.1

Bob came tundering toward them, "WHERE ARE THE OTHERS?!" he yelled. Amanda and Rex looked at each other. Think \where are Lynne and Norbert anyway?\ They looked all around, past Bob, in front of them. It was pretty stupid to look in front of them, because Amanda knew that Norbert and I had been behind them, when they were running away. \This can't be happening.........this can' be happening.......we couldn't have lost them...we couldn't have been by ourselves\. Amanda thought, she looked at Rex and she felt a little bit better about herself. For some reason she knew that Rex was happy, and he knew that they would be able to do WHATEVER they wanted later. She was quite happy, but she had to find her friends. Bob was still really angry, he picked up amanda, and started yelling at her. Amanda didn't know what to do, but rex did. He punched Bob right in the groin, and when Bob let Amanda go, punched him right in the face, which let out this green sort of purple blood. Amanda patted Bob on the head, because she thought he was the most prettiest creature she could ever have met...well wait not the PRETTIEST but very pretty. They started running, Bob was still whimpering in pain. \How could we do something to such a pretty creature?\ Amanda had thought.2

"Why are we writing this story anyway?" Kasey asked me as we were writing the story of our BIG adventure. 3

"I'm not sure, but I think we might have to keep going so people won't be pissed." I looked right at Alli.4

"BUT! It's soooooooooo boring right now! It was fine in the beginning, then Alli just HAD to have that fight with BOB you know?" Kasey rolled her eyes, "I mean Bob doesn't HAVE to like what we're all doing anyway." 5

"I know that."6

"So, what are we gonna talk about now?" Kasey asked her eyes looking off in space, she didn't know what her imaginations would lead. She didn't know what my imaginations would lead, or Alli's or anyone's and she kinda wanted to know...in a way.7

"I don't know Kasey, I think we are just gonna have to let what nature tells us." I was confused at my own statement, but Kasey wasn't she just shrugged. 8

"Alright, why don't we stop this little detour, and write more." I told Kasey, she started thinking of what would be written next and shrugged.9

"Ight, why don't we?" We started to write the next part of the story.10

Author notes

In this part....Lynne and I were bored of the story, we wanted to write more, but it just....wasn't getting anywhere.

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  • RainyLullaby
    August 14, 2004
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    wow, i now know what you guys were THINKING when you wrote the story. I've never seen THAT before. Actually i got a little lost until I realized that you were telling me what happened outside the story....