so your on the search for a new mp3 player
here is a couple of hints
never go with ur mum she wants the cheapest of them all.
always choose a dull clor, what you wanted to be different
always buy your junk food first, so as not to be seen to the hottest check out chick alive that ur a donut king worshiper
never wait for your dad to finish work, cause he aint got the right working hours and by the time he is finished the only stoor opens is just grandmahs stocking a wonderfull range of bowling gear and bridgit jhones undies.
Never ever ever grab out your money before you enter the shop, cause the winds always likely to blow it half way down the plaza, and their you are running around down low, like an ambush army camp squater, well either that or you look like your taking a crap near every shops door.
last but not least never go to the cheapest shop you can find i.e the NOTHING OVER 2 DOLLAR shop, with ur mother who stands in line for 2o minutes only oy have the check out women say- we dont sell mp3 players this is a NOTHING OVER 2 SHOP..... hense the name
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I enjoyed this piece, because most of it's true and yet it's funny. Ha, ha.
I especially liked paragraphs 2 and 6, cause they are the funniest of them all.
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Awesome tips!
It was funny ^^
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lol thanks for the hints ill rember that next time i need an mp3beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Hehe, sounds like a funny time.
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Hmmm, I enjoyed this, though it didn't make me laugh. Good job, I enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest ^.^
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It was pretty cool! Hey , don't you dare try spoiling little kids . Haha! I loved it . Too good . All the best to you!
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