Iran- written by Tennille chase
PART FOUR
"Tory have you seen that magazine anywhere in the lounge room I put it on the table, I'm sure I did and now it's gone, oh well you know what I'm like " Bandit looked at Tory searching for an awnser. She looked up from her notebook "I wouldn't have the slightest clue" she said trying not to blush. Bandit raise his eyebrows "Hay I know that look, you took it didn't you, you indian giver, you" . He laughed jumping onto her bed. "What look" Tory asked pushing Bandit of the bed. "That look, the I did it but im not confessing to it look, come on then where is it Tory".
She giggled sliding of the bed next to Bandit. "So what if I did, what are you gunna do about it huh" she gave him a friendly punch in the arm , standing up. "Nothing, I just need it back that's all". "Oh do you now, and what would you be needing it for". Bandit stood up, close to Tory. "I could ak you the same question Miss Helle Belle" he looked into her eyes. Tory began to feel strange with Bandit standing so close, she moved back, slipping on the magazine. She bent over picking it up.
Bandit tapped her on the ass, as she stood up straight, turning the pages through the magazine. she looked at all pictures of the naked women, spread across the pages. Bandit took the magazine from her hands, stepping closer towards her, dropping the magazine on the floor. "How come you wanted to look at the magazine Tory" he asked is a soft voice, that sent prickles up her spine. She looked at his face, moving her body closer towards his. "I wanted to see what it was that I'm missing out on"> Bandit smiled breathing in deeply. "So what are you missing out on" he squeeked, his body skurming.
Tory felt a sudden rush of sexual urges as Bandit touched her arm, leaning forward. "Your making me so horny right now" he whispered into her ear, putting his hands on her waist. "Oh fuck, Bandit, oh my god, you know we can't do this , it might fuck up our friendship" she whispered starting to feel really horny herself. "Fuck up our friendship, we have been friends for 16 years, I don't think one fuck is going to stuff it all up, come on Tory you want this to, don't deny it". He was right, she did want it, but probably for all the wrong reasons, and yet in her mind she was convinced that it was alright.
He pushed her hard againts her bedroom wall, tearing of his shirt.His chisled chest making Tory hornier than ever. She had seen it before a million times before today and never felt this way. His peirced nipple, his abs, her lips made their way across them, as he pulled of her shirt, biting her shoulders. "Fuck Bandit, oh god fuck" she cried as he pulled his jeans down , then hers. Her insides throbbing with pleasure as he stuck himself inside her, pushing harder and deeper. "I plan to" he whispered rbbing her breast. She sucked his lips, letting him find her tongue, moving it around in his mouth. He pressed her harder againts the wall.
It felt good, a release fo tension, the build up inside. But it wasn't long before all those wrong reasons caught up with her and the tears swelling up inside her eyes began to pour, as she bgan to breakdown. Bandit stopped looking at her teary face. "Oh fuck, did I hurt you" he asked pulling himself away from her, as she began to howl, holding her hand across her mouth. She shook her, her head pounding. "What is it then, oh baby come here". Bandit said pulling up her pants and his, embracing her in his arms " come here baby".
"When I say original, I mean proiginal, not some rip of shakespear or a hollywood box office wanna be plot script, you are all highly creative intellectuals, I want to see all your creative juices and your hearts and souls pu into this play " Mr Physics yelled, a little to enthsiastically to the class as they took their seats. Tory took her seat next to Angie, throwing her bag onto the table. Angie gave her a little wave as she opened her notebook.
"Now because I know how hard it is to think of a topic, I have taken it upon myself to fill my hat with topics you can choose, now when I come past you and your partners with the hat, one of you can randomly choose a topic for the both of you, I think I can trust you to not fight over who picks it" he chuckled, standing up. "You wanna choose " Angie askedTory, watching Mr Physics head their way. "Whatever"Tory awnsered bitterly. Mr Physics stopped in front of them. Tory out her hand in his hat, pulling out a peice of fluff. She pulled her hand back " Eww gorss, that's gross". Mr Physics face turned red with embarassment. Angie stuck her hand in his hat, pulling out a scrunched up peice of paper. Tory watched as she unwrapped it, and Mr Physics walked away to the next set of partners. Angie wrapped the peice of paper up, flicking it away.
"So what did we get" Tory asked feeling a tad anxious. "Ethnic Liberty" Angie said turning away. "Oh that should be an interesting topic" Tory said sensing Angies anger, even though she couldn't understand why she was upset. "Are you alright, cause I am sure we can ask to change it if their is going to be a problem". Angie turned around, frusration burning in her eyes. "No, dont bother about it, it's a perfect topic, i know all about it, its my bloddy life". She turned away, facing the front of the room.
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good job keep it up^^


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keep it up!! thats one hell of a sex seen between Tory and Bandit but Tory and Angie need to hook up...there so cute lol
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its so nice. i cant wait for the next part... :] how i wish tory and angie would hit it off. i mean, develop their love-hate relationship into something romantic.lol
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wow
nice story good begining pulled me into the plotbeginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 4, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Hey that was really good cant wait to read the next part
just a few typos k
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Interesting.
Well, so Tory and Bandit were just friends. Now what are they? That was a hot sex scene, but the transition to the class was abrupt. You are still using 'of' instead of 'off'. Other than that, there were only a couple of typos. Much better.
What is 'Ethnic Liberty'?
Andy

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Just a suggestion but if you put a little page break between when it goes from tory and bandit to school might be a nice touch, not necessary though.
Oh man, I hope their friendship is ok, really hot scene though, I loved the frantic-ness of it. She seems really messed up now though, oh it is so sad.
(I really shouldn't have read this, I have only done half my readings, gargh!)
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