Friday night...@ the mall...
I was gone for quite sometimes, I was far far away from a creature call, woman, I haven’t touch, kiss, or even dream abut sex in a long time, now It has been three weeks since I have been back, and I decided to take a walk to the mall. Took a clean shower and dressed up nicely…I was fresh and the smell was smelled thousand miles away…thirty minutes after I entered the mall, a pretty MUMMA walked up to me with a bright smile and introduced herself…I didn’t remember a not a single letter in her name…what a shame…anyways she had a beautiful smile, teeth were as shiny as the bright star…her skin tone was standing out like a high beam in a lightless streets. It was a caramel looking like…her smile stole my dreams. I was halted immediately when she spoke…I lost every single word I could think of to respond, I was basically muted for a minute…I was trying my best to speak but I was shocking from my own words…it seemed like when I say a word or try to, I swallowed it…I was speechless…the fear of speaking to such an angel looking woman instill in my head…I never imagined to be confronted by a woman like her…smile itself snatched my heart out of my lungs…she left me breathless…hopeless and dreamless…the thought of wanting to ask her to repeat her name again stock in my head, but wont slip out of my mouth…it was one of the most awkward situation I have ever been in…the staring contest went on for more than five minutes, the angel looking like, looked like she was send my way purposely…it felt like I was to be taken to heaven…the feelings were deep, the anxiety grew from being relaxed into nerve wreck…I was lost into her world, wanting to find out more about a female like this…finally I got myself together and was able to throw word around here and there, and held a communication with a little nerve wreck and in a slow motion like…
Part Two…
Sorry Ms. I think you have something that belongs to me!! She looked shocked with a sign on her forehead saying what the fuck you talking about? Well Ms. I think you stole my heart and I know I can’t live without my heart, so how about I get it back? She smiled and commented on my responds, comically…we kept up in a conversation and things began to heat up as we poke each other’s G spots… smiles were exchanged, and compliments were passed on…time was against us, and hands were ticking quite fast…she decided to invite me to her place since I was just flapping my lips around for a while…with a little hesitation I accepted her invitation…So what time again? Sunday at 1500…is that ok? she replied…oh yeah sure that’s perfectly fine with me!! :=)…we went about our ways…twenty five meters apart, I smacked myself in the head…damn it, idiot….and immediately bust a U turn and yelled out loud, and again a smile shone my face, and was temporarily blinded by her beauty…a smile like a lighting she struck me.
Hey sweety, I am sorry for the acting stupid, I just want to know your name again, I forgot it:=(…sarcastically she replies back and said, I will tell you when you need to know it, she smiled again ad walked away; I was; I was left tanding in the middled of the mall alone, puzzled and parylized confused and lost in a world I don’t belong to…
Sunday Morning
It was a Sunday morning, when I heard a knock on my door…I was surprise by the knock, because it was quiet, gentle, and sexy. I relectently got up, and before I opened the door I first wanted to know who it was and confirm the identity of the stranger standing in from of my apartment. As looud as I could, I yelled out, who is there? In a deep mean voice…a sexy voice replied through the door, my heart felt cold, my eyes dropped dead, my hands went numbed and a chil ran through my spine, legs shaking…the angel like looking woman standing infront of my door, was the same girl I met two days ago in the mall…pondering over my thoughts, wondering how she found me, where did she get my address? My braing burning!!. So without hesitating, I open the door and again with her smile she hepnitized me immediately…smile so bright, seductive, and damn she was beautiful. Her name was JASMINE…or JASS short for Jasmine…
She was wearing a black fishnet, a black see through thong, and fuck no bra, with a tight black tube top that fucking shit was tight up on her upper body, causing her breast stick out like a rocket round…she had on a short black mini-skirt…she was so sexy, and damn she was turning me on without even touching me…she offered me a hug…but shit I could not handle it anymore, my nipples went hard, my dick was standing out of my pants like a screw driver, I was nervous, shaking wanting to move in and do the damn thing right away, but my concisou was telling to hold on tight and wait a couple minutes to get my grind on…”Thinking of me? She asked looking deep into my brown eyes, dick hard like a missle.. yes! I have been looking forward to this moment for so long…I offered her to come in…she walked straight and stood in the middle of the room.
Part three
Aren’t you going to hug me or something…she asked, immediately I walked up to her, grabbed her hand, and kissed it, to her chest she pulled me in close, the heat through her close I can feel it…my body against hers, it was like two magnets coming together, condcuing some sexual feelings…
She surprised me with a kiss, and then held on to me so tight that i thought my heart ws going to stop…so I take my left hand placed it on her ass. She started to massage my tongue. She felt her self go moist, and damn she broke th ekiss and went down to my semi-hard cock; unbuttoned my pants and started to tease me. I began to moan, as she play with my penis, rubbing it and squeezing it hard, it felt like it was going to cut off. She then went in to my underweat and pulled it down, and started to suck on my dick for a couple minutes, and then she took two steps forward and flashed me with her damn, fucking victoria’s secret thong…to the floor I see her skirt slid, and she showed me her, freshly shaved pussy. So to my dick I go, grabbed it and started rubbing the the head a little bit, and gave it a stroke, and here she come, walking up to me and started to suck on my cock and jiggling my balls, I started to moan like crazy yelling and cussing…JASS was wet enough for some oen to slip and fall, if it was a tile floor…to the floor I laid her, and and down to her pussy I dived, sucking it an licking her clit so bad that she almost broke my neck…she was pulling me in hard, her legs wrapped around my shoulders, hands on my head…I eat her pussy like a fucking steak…she began to moan as I continue to thrust my tongue through her juicy pussy.
Part four…
I came out and climbed on top, and inserted my hard cock in her wet pussy. Slowly I began to thrust, then faster and harder. Both of us moaning and screaming to go deeper and harder. She lifted her legs high enough to get me in deeper. Thirty minute sinto the action she was screaming to thurst her harder, and fatser, she came, but screaming from the extra pleasure, I too came but kept on thrusting in her, making us come the second time. The feelings was good, like I never felt before…I fell off of her, and laid next to each other on the floor…breathing heavily... see you when you come over latter right? Slowly and tiredly i responded…oh yeah ofcourse.
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fucking hot as hell!
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not 2 good
it would've been way better and easier to understand if u had spelled correctly, had good puntuation, and smaller paragraphs. the story wuz good, but i really didn't like the fact that it was so hard to read. proofread it next time and don't utse so many commas and ...s; k!beginning: 1, language: 1, plot: 5, ending: 4, dialog: 1, characters: 2.
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thanks stayaliveaddict
thanks for your suggestions it helps me improve on my writing skills and so, i will make sure that next time i proof read it first with others. thanks alot
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The plot was gppd but the use of comma`s was overly done, try one per sentence and speech marks are good too when people are talking and make the paragraphs smaller, so that the words don`t appear to be runnning into each other. Also there is lots of spelling errors and some repetitive sentences.
plot: 5.
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the storys great but whatch the spelling and puncutation marks. the beginning was hard to understand because of that..
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