"Oh my effing God, I am going to be sick."
Jeff and I had just gotten off of the "Twister" ride at the St. Greg's annual fair. I felt dizzy, sticky, and ready to puke...a deadly product of riding the damn thing five times, with a hot dog in between times two and three. I am going to kill him for making me go on that thing...
"Woot, that was awesome! Wanna go again, Sammy? One more time? Please??"
Jeff had finally emerged out of the safety ring of the ride. His hair was wind blown and a dazed smile was plastered on his face. Why guys find excitement from being thrown around in a metal cage while twirling sixty miles an hour, I'll never know.
"Jeff, there is no way in Heck I'm going on that thing again."
I flopped down where I stood and layed my head down on the cool grass. "I am way to tired."
"That's not what you said last night, babe." Jeff said with a wink as he layed down beside me. He laughed a hearty laugh, like he had just said the funniest thing in the world...I, of course, kicked him in the shin.
"Ow! Whatdya do that for!?"
"For being a sick freak, that's why. Now, help me up, I gotta go home."
"Awww..." Jeff made his 'puppy eyes' (which consists of him opening his eyes as wide as they can go and pulling his lower lip down. It reminds me of a cat as it's about to cough up a hairball)
"No." I said, my head starting to feel a bit better. "Let's go. Besides, I promised my Mom we'd help with dinner tonight, remember? It's your turn to take the gizzards out of the turkey"
Ever since Jeff and I had known each other, our families, who had been very close even before we were born, ate dinner together once a month. It was always the same thing: turkey, mashed potatoes, butter biscuits and cooked carrots. The task of removing the gizzards from the turkey always fell upon Jeff and I, mainly because no one else wanted to do it. So we decided to take turns, switching off every month.
"Aww, damn, I hate the gizzards." Jeff grumbled as we climbed into my beat up grey volvo.
"Who doesn't?" I retorted and drove away towards my little house on Everturn road.
Author notes
to be continued....
A contest entry
- New contesty idea thing! FUNNESS! by Taylor Renee.
175 points, ended September 30, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Another comment from dear me!
Might as well figure out who you all are and just message you
The way this is gonna work is this:
From now on you can write only as much as you want. Everyone has to do this next part, that I already have going, but after that you may end your story anywhere.
You can stop it at any place, and I'll keep giving new ideas until everyone finishes!
The longer your story ends up, the better chance at winning. But that doesn't mean someone who stops can't win!
So, get it?
If not, message me and I'll explain more
I'm so weird.
I love how everything's working out! Keep it up and get writing!
xoxo
♥
Tay -
Okay guys!
I'm ending it with just these 12 entries, because I haven't gotten enough entries *mumbles*
NOW!
Next in your story you will write about one of the following (or more than one):
You're friends getting into a fight.
They watch movies.
(Phantom of the Opera, Any Disney movies, and a bunch of other bonus. But any movie is fine Also, bonus if they have fun with their food! Hah.)
One of the friends starts going out with someone and the other friend really doesn't approve, but their advice is basically being ignored until something happens that the other friend is in trouble, but it's too late because the other friends left.
They just talk some while hanging out.
TRUTH OR DARE! Hah. Best game ever. Let em play!
Or make up something. Hah, that was pointless. But I'd love it if the majority was bent on these!
xoxo
Love,
Tay
PS: Message me when you update! No word limit or anything! -
AHHHHHHHH!
I am in love with this already. I need more people to enter, gosh darn it, so that I can read more of what you guys are writing!
This was written really well, you did a great job. It already looks great! Tell anyone you know to enter this contest, gosh darn it, because i need to order you guys to write more now!Cannot wait for more!
Awesome job, good luck and thanks so much for entering!
(I don't know who you are)
xoxo
taylor
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