My saying

When you step, you bring your feet up.

When you punch, you bring your arms up.

When you block, you bring your guard up.

And you will always, keep your heart up!

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  • Melli
    February 8, 2008

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    This is good!!! Nice little quote. This peice is cute and quaint. Good job, and good luck! =D

    KEEP WRITING!

    -Melli <33


  • So Strange Greeters member
    September 10, 2007

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    This was simple and pretty good...not exactly something I would say is my saying of life, but to a lot of people, I am sure it would be. I still think it's so good to be such a simple and well written piece of writing.

    Keep up the good work!


  • Dreams of Insanity
    September 10, 2007
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    Hmmm...my motto involves punching too!

    Love your friends, love your family, and if anyone does other words you punch that mother&%$#@* in the face!

    Yeah...I'm a very violent person when it comes to my family. Very protective. Mom says I get my brute strength from my dad. I'm not sure that's a complement though.

    Yours is a nice motto too.


  • RedHearts
    September 9, 2007

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    Must say this a very interesting saying....but not for my contest. I find it more like 'how you live your life' type of saying. Sorry, but I will have to remove it from the contest. Enter something which goes by the contest.


    • SaitoKojima
      September 9, 2007
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      Honest truth?

      I just entered random things, to get more views.


  • six of diamonds
    August 11, 2007

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    Hi! This is just a reminder that the contest (Gold, gold, gold--PIF) is ending today at 5pm central (US)...I hope to see your entry there :-)


  • six of diamonds
    August 10, 2007
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    Hmmm, did you mean for this in the contest or just as a space holder? Sorry if that sounds dumb!


  • six of diamonds
    August 10, 2007
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    Prompts are up!


  • heartfullofvenom
    August 9, 2007
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    oh and heyyy.... you forgot your favorite band and song...
    tisk. tisk.

  • heartfullofvenom
    August 9, 2007
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    interesting...

    i've never really heard anything like this. It's different, you kinds lost me at the heart part. All in all it's a pretty good saying.

    !Good Luck!

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