Love

The world just finds simple too complicated and complication they find simple. And that is why I hate the world, for I, unlike the world, know that love is the most simple thing of all, yet it holds the most value of all the riches the world can offer.

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Favorite band: Evanescence
Favorite song: hmm... that's hard to choose.. I guess.. Good Enough

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  • Shythang
    August 10, 2007
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    Good

  • Elegant Inspirer
    August 10, 2007

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    How true.

    I agree with you Julez. Loveing someone is the simplest thing in the world but making it work between the two of you is the hard complicated part but that isn't loving them. Loveing someone isn't an action its a feeling way deep inside whether it be you don't ever want to leave that person or you wish no harm ever falls upon them its a feeling the action of making it work between you and those you love is totally diffrent you people are getting the two confused. Its simple to do though because we don't really have a word for making it work I guess its romance or relationship. Good stuff Julez I really like this one!!!
    Elli


  • NewGuy90
    August 10, 2007
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    Wow! That is beautiful!!! I agree with Misaru-Mew though, love isn't really that simple. Even though I don't completely agree, this still remains an excellent little extract! The last part, "yet it holds the most value of all the riches the world can offer.", was so pretty! And true!

    Good luck in the contest and thanks for the great read!
    ♥NewGuy90


    • JuliaAlexandrovna
      August 10, 2007

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      In my exact words to Misaru-Mew:

      It really depends on which way you look upon the word "love." You could look at it romantically, that sometimes gets complicated. But if you look at it in the perspective of being kind to others and showing love in that way, it is really pretty simple. I live to help people. That's why I plan to be a psychologist.

      x Julez

      • NewGuy90
        August 10, 2007
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        Yeah, that's so true... Haha! What's the chances of that! I'm at the stadium in my high-school life were I have to pick a career and my mom and I discussed it last night, I also want to become a psychologist!


  • heartfullofvenom
    August 9, 2007

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    I!!! LIKE!!!!THIS!!!ONE!!!!

    very interesting, and i really like the last part, and where you said" i, unlike the world." it gives it separation, which makes it different.
    I like her song "hello"

    !Good luck!


  • Lizz Emm
    August 9, 2007
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    I agree with you....only I don't think love is that simple. .-.

    Nicely worded, though.

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