fantasy- struggle- random poem

only in my stated fantasy

when your breath chose to take over me

when my heart learnt to fill up with praise

it sleeps till today

when i am all alone

when im in my parted fear

when your throat

whispered clear

my struggle for determination

my hearts flown for starvation

when she lifts me up

then she screams

i need no struggle to belive

i am her's thats all I need

stop those tears

and dream of me

you'll be safe

inside my ocean eyes.

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  • Bello.Midnight
    September 23

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    ♣ Blake

    CAPITILIZATION HUN.....
    READ IT CAP-IT-IL-I-ZATION !!!
    I cannot spell...
    but none the less I always admire your poetry.

    ♣ Blake


  • im.perfectly.flawed
    August 19, 2007
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    This was good, very intimate like.

    ~Ebb.


  • Intrepid
    August 9, 2007
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    people i forgot to note

    this is a randomw poem because I matched it with music I HOPE u like my random words of emotion