Once upon a time there was a beautiful boy.
I loved him.
The end.
Author notes
I fear I may have been to cheeky, is there such a thing as so unoriginal that it is orginal?
A contest entry
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Wow. LOL. That was sooo LONG.
You loved the beautiful boy...but did he love you back? dun dun dun. XD
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I loved that story!!! It was like, there was a beautiful little boy, and then it was like, you loved him, then it was like, the end! It was sooo cool!!!!
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wow that was the shortest story i ever read.maybe you should express the boy more.
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I'm a little afraid my comment is going to turn out longer than the story.
Let me say one thing about stories written in two or three hundred words: they're hard to pull off. They involve editing, summarizing, re-writing, and probably a lot more work than they're worth, because people spend thirty seconds reading them and move on.
Now let me tell you something about stories written in fourteen words. They're more like titles.
Thank you for entering.
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People love this? Even applaud...
There "was" a boy... You "loved" him... lmaobeginning: 1, language: 1, plot: 1, ending: 1, dialog: 1, characters: 1.
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I think they like it cause it is open to interpretation, and it really is like every fairytale, what does Imao mean?
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hahahahahaha. I loved him. The End. no comment. lol.
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lmao- that definatly was supershort but then agen wot is it to stories based on luv- nothing but luv so it cud jus get painfully boring 2 elaborate more on the subject. I lyk ur darin way of describin tha story thru just tha lyn, ur oviouly a person hu duznt care abt bad critism. and 2 ryt itz jus 'every fairytale'
Clever!beginning: 4, language: 2, plot: 3, ending: 3, dialog: 2, characters: 3.
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Wow. that's very brief. I would have liked to have read more, especially more details.
Like who is the protagonist? What's the plot besides love? Why does that love not come to fruition.
Although this is an interesting idea, to make a story this short. Hmmm... -
ZZzzz.
Very one sided.
I hate to disappoint but this is no Short Story. This was rather uninteresting and boring.
End of story!
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Rofl, very super short. Well meant umm... story. It says alot in those few words.
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Short but classic. And I love that you called a boy beautiful, lots of girls are afraid to use that word, but some boys truly are just beautiful. lol, my comment is longer than your entire story. ^_^
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Wow.
Who knew that three lines could say so much?
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i like this! yea so what if its three lines but its cool
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That was really cool! It's so short, yet holds much depth and hidden meaning.
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wow way to go- you drew my attention so fast.. nah truely a good peice because its simple and frankly WICKED.... really now who is that boy hmmm
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