Final Flight- Full moon stalker ( Part Fourteen)

Final Flight- Full moon stalker

( Part Fourteen)

Milloe slowly walked towards Marishka, pacing the words in her head. She had to be carefull. One wrong word could throw her of the edge. She knew what she was capable of. It didn't need explaining, she was already suicidal. She stood besides Marishka the wind blowing hard on her face.

Above the clouds had turned to grey, Milloe began to realise that this was a crucial part of time. A sign from god, to thread as lightly as she could. "Nice veiw from up here" Milloe said looking at Marishka's bllod shot teary eyes. "I bet it would look better from the bottom" Marishka whispered. "Why would you say that' Milloe asked trying not to sound scared. Marishka looked below at all the cars passing by. It was a 20 story building, she would never survive. She turned to look at Milloe, her tears blurring her eyes. She wiped them away with her sleeve, looking at Milloes shoulder.

"You know I thought that maybe it was a dream, that maybe I had just been drinking to much, but now I see it was just Toru's way of finding you". Milloe stared at Marishka confused "What are you talking about, who's Toru?". Marishka clenched her fist. "Toru is your destiny and my destiny". I don't understand, my destiny was to find you and I have, I love you Marishka, isn't that enough to know, your the one, the only one. my first for ever and eternity". Marishka laughed "Don't you give me that etenity crap, we both know that our destiny is to destroy each other so that my people can live like humans, finally free". Milloe frown dissapeared to " Why the hell would you think something like that". Beacause it's true" Marishka whispered looking over the edge again. "Your making no sense, Marishka you need to breath and tell me how your feeling at the moment".

"It's that tattoo, the sign of the angel destined to destroy me and my people, and I wont let you destroy me". Marishka wiped her eyes again, walking over to the other side of the roof. She climed onto the ledge.

Milloes hearst stopped for a few seconds as she began to see horrible flashes of light. Her body froze, but she had to move and move fast. "Marishka what are you doing, get down from that ledge your going to fall if your not carefull". Marishka shook her head " I loved you, I let you in and you betrayed me, but I wont let you destroy me, I love you to much". Milloe slowly stepped foward, untill she was only centimeters away from Marishka. " Come down Marishka, I promise whatever i did, I didn't mean to do, we can get through this together. Milloe stared into Marishka's eyes, seeing nothing but pain. "I don't think so" marishka said looking towards the sky. Milloe held her hands out " come one you don't want to do that".

"It's time for this free hird to take her final flight" she turned to Milloe smiling " Just watch me fly " she cried stepping of the ledge.

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  • k8fairy
    August 8, 2007
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    Oh my god! OMG OMG OMG! Did not see that coming. And you know what I think the best part is? That maybe Toru was just a dream and the mark a conicidence and Marishka is a crazy person dying for what she thinks is right, oh, even if that isn't how you meant it, I think that is an awesome interpretation.
    Just loved it loved it loved it.

  • Angie91
    August 8, 2007

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    The existence of an unreal world in the world , and the disappearance of its last clue makes it perfect . You're brilliant!


  • Andy Stephenson Greeters member
    August 7, 2007

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    Hmm.

    Well, does Marishka fly or hit bottom? Has the story ended? I was hoping it would work out between Marishka and Milloe. This turned out to be an interesting story. I liked it.

    Andy