That's what good friends do - Full moon stalker ( part ten )

That's what good friends do - Full moon stalker

( Part Ten)

They sat in the park, on the grass nder a large tree. The breeze blowing warmly on their faces as they watched the passers by. Marishka still confused turned to milloe, patting her hand. Milloe turned to face Marishka , a smile upon her face. "Don't say it, I alredy know what your going to say, and the awnser is that's what good friends do". Marishka smiled in awe, who was this women, this stranger, she had not even met 1o hours ago in a lonely depressing bar. How was it that she could make her smile and know what she's about to say before she evn said it.

"But why, am I some charity case, is this what you do, pick up random drunks and take them home, befriending them for some twisted intentions or betrayle. Milloe frowned " why do you talk like that, as if you not worth the time of the day to anybody, have you not looked at your self Marishka, I mean really looked deep into who you are instead of belittling yourself, and for who Marishka, who are yo doing this for".

Marishka turned away "I'm not doing it for no one, I'm not even doing this at all, and you didn't awnser my question, what am I to you Milloe". Milloe stoop up, crossing her arms over her chest. "To me Marishka you are a lost soul, not a charity case, you don't know who you are or what you are, but I do, I see it in you, the beauty, the happiness, you put on that gothic bullshit so that people wont like you, so that you wont get hurt , cause heavan forbid Marishka if some one fell in love with you and worser yet, your so cynical to love, I just know that deep down inside you are hiding the best part of you and that is to be loved". Milloe sighed looking up at the sky. "Your pretentious attitude to life is just so depressing".

Marishka looked up at milloe, tears in her eyes. Milloe faced Marishka looking into her eyes ."I know your scared of heartbreak through rejection, but I see deeper than you see yourself, if you just open yourself up you can be free". "What if I can't " Marishka whispered, looking at the clouds that now formed in the sky. Milloe sat down besides Marishka, wrapping her arms around her shoulders, her warm embrace calming Marishka. She wiped Marishka's tears away, holding her face in her hands " I know I can".

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  • oooohhh. neat
    runs to read somemore


  • k8fairy
    August 8, 2007

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    Oh that is beautiful, I am so going to read more soon, but I have to do some homework hardcore, so sorry.


  • Andy Stephenson Greeters member
    August 7, 2007

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    Going along good

    Marishka and Milloe are friends. That's a nice touch and Milloe's compassion for Marishka is refreshing. It will be interesting to see what comes next. You have some typos.

    Andy

  • Angie91
    August 7, 2007

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    The comment bar couldn't be accessed the first time I read this chapter . That was in the afternoon . But , hey , great job! And this bar is working well now .