Corsetts and Demons- Full moon stalker (part 6)

Corsetts and Demons- Full moon stalker

(part six)

They sat at a large metle table, platefulls of dead animals corpse, spread across the table, a terrible stench of deseased, delicious in their eyes. Marishka had been taken upstairs to a rotting room to be clothed by Toru's servents. Stockings, dresse's, corsett's, jewlery and a crown had been Toru's wished for Marishka's statement. As the feast had been prepeared an awnser's promised to be fufilled. She waited, as the servents dressed her, while Toru watched. The servernts touching her parts, lips making sucking sound as they clicked their tongues, awaiting instructions from their master.

When she was dressed, Toru shooed them away, taking Marishka hand, leading her into the dinning room. Pulling up a chair, Tonu ushered Marishka to take a seat. Clicking her fingers for her servents.Marishka could still taste Toru's blood on her lips, it tasted quiet familiar, but she couldn't quiet put her finger on it. The plates where laid on the table, and glasses where filled with rats blood as the candles on the table shone. Toru lifted her glass in the air for a toast.

Marishka thanked a serevnt, lifting up her own glass in the air, chiming them together to creat a sound so harmonious Marishka could have swarn it to be beautiull. They took sips from their glasses smiling at each other like love struck teens. Though this wasn't love, this was buisness, and as Marishka was about to soon find out, lives where at risk.

"So my love" Tonu said, taking a bird from the plate wripping it's head of . " Your thinking, why am I here am I correct" Tonu asked, biting it to peices. Marishka's human instincts set in as she cringed, watching Tonu hack at the head with her teeth. She nodded "Yes it would assume so". Tonu smiled "Your here Marishka , beacause you are but queen of minerva orlandor".

"Minerva orlador, what" Marishka asked. "This world my dear, all that is good and evil on ourside and the innocent world". Marishka nodded , " you mean here and earth". Toru laughed "Marishka , this is earth, just another dimension of time". Marishka looked at Toru, taking a bird for her own self to hack at, suddenly feeling a fetish for decay. "What are you saying" she asked". "What I am saying, my love is that you are a women of great power and responsibility, it is up to you to save us all, your sons and daughters, your people, including me, will be doomed in destiny if you do not save us".

Marishka shook her head " I still don't understand you, why me, why are you in some kind of danger, explain it to me in english". A servent walked past pouring more blood into her glass. Marishka grabbed her hand tight, pulling the servent towards her. "Do you know what she is talking about". The servent shhok her head scared. "Let her go, Marishka she doesn't know, she doesn't have a clue, now focus okay or you might miss something".

Marishka smiled " I think I already have". "Quiet" Toru screeched knocking her glass of the table . "You humans don't know when to keep your mouth shut do you". Marishka shook her head, about to tell her that they did, sometimes bt Toru cut in before she had a chance . "The fact of the matter is marishka, you don't have a chance in what you do, you have to do it, it's your fate, your destiny if you will, and I won't let you sit back and destroy what you created".

Marishka nodded paying full attention to Toru. "On earth their walks a women, pure blood, no evil, heart to heart and her destiny is to destroy her before she destroys you". Marishka couldn't help but laugh. "You can't be serious, did you not notice I have no idea how to do that, if It wasn't for that crazy girl following me home, I would still be in my nice warm bed right now, sleeping of a hangover".

Toru glared angrily at Marishka " Don't act so innocent, and don't pretend because we both know what you are capable of, and I wont take any stupidity from you either". Marishka stopped laughing, and grabbed another bird. "The women you must destroy, walks the streets, close to you, she is very in touch with her mind and can sense danger and evil a mile away, we are yet to know the finer details of her figure, but we do know that on her left shoulder she has imprinted into her skin, a pure heart, and a stake driven through the heart, if you can find her you save us, if you don't then this world, our world , will me forever lost".

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  • k8fairy
    August 6, 2007

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    Rat blood from a glass, I read a book where a guy caught a rat, pulled off its head and filled the glass. I really like the idea of a rotting animal buffet.
    Main dealing with all that, quiet a lot to put on girl! Pressure pressure.


  • Andy Stephenson gold member
    August 6, 2007

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    Now we're getting somewhere

    The plot thickens. She has to search out and destroy the good woman. That should be interesting. Corrections: metal, corpses, servants. P2 Toru. P3 beautiful. P4 Toru, pieces. P5 our side, woman. P6 shook. P7 off, but, choice not chance. P8 woman, off. P9 won't, woman, be.

    I think this story has some potential, but I don't know if it has a market. Anyway, writing it will help you improve as a writer and you can go back over it and make it better.

    Andy

  • erectmeonit
    August 5, 2007
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    Good going! Cheers!