Wings- full moon stalker (part 5)

Wings- full moon stalker

(part 5)

Marishka opened her eyes. Letting them ajust to the darkness. She felt full, but souless. Her clothes had been wripped of her and they lay in a pile in front of her. She could feel the wetness of the blood on her hands as she moved around in the dark.

Bumping into something hard she fell back. " Get up my queen" a voice shuddered in what seemed to be a room, the voice seemed to bounce of the walls, echoing a dark sound. Marishka stood up, trying ot follow the voice, hoping maybe the stranger had awnsers. "Follow me" the voice said as a bright light now shone in Marishka direction. She looked aroun the room, the walls were covered in mirrors.

She looked at herself, blood stained and naked, and screamed as she took a closer look at her body. Extending from the spine, right down to her tail bone was a pair of wings, growing out of her back. They sparkled in the light and felt like leather to touch. Blackened by shades of grey and purple, they clung to her like a pair of birds wings, enlocked for her protection.

"Hurry up" the voice yelled, as Marishka returned her gave towards the light, following the voice. Listening to it sing, or rather screech a frightening tune. Every now and then the voice would hiss, sending shivers up Marishka's spine. She couldn't see a thing as she walked over the hard ground following the strangers light, untill they stopped in front of what looked like a lake. " You must fly across the lake my queen to Toru Terkilla's castle, she will meet you their" the stranger said said pushing Marishka foward.

"Fly, I can't fly" Marishka yelled, her voice echoing across the murkey lake. "Nonsense, of course you can my queen, you were born to fly, you gave us our wings, so that we could fly to feed on the innocent, you must fly over the lake to Toru Terkilla's castle, she is expecting you now". The stranger pushed her further into the water, walking away.

"But wait" she screamed, but no one awnsered, their was no- one their, the stranger had dissapeared. Marishka stood in the water, letting it cover her feet. Fly, she could'nt fly, she was human, human's could'nt fly and why was her calling her queen, why was everyone or everything, calling her queen. "Im not a queen, I'm a freak, but not a queen" she whispered looking at her wings that had now some how on their own, opened ready for flight. The flapped in the cold air, and Marishka watched with fasination as she rose higher and higher, untill she could see the castle on the other side of the lake.

The full moon shone above it, giving her a good veiw of the exterior of the castle. Though in her mind it looked more like a haunted house from a horror movie, more than a castle. She could feel the cold air wrapping itself around her wings, as she flew across the lake, making her way towards the castle. She was freezing as she flew in the air, and hoped that who ever owned the castle, would have some clothes.

"Toru Terkilla" Marishka whispered as she landed on the stony ground, in front of the entrance to the castle. "Where had she gone, wasn't she the one that had taken her here in the first place. Marishka knocked on the door, stepping back to wait. A few seconds passed before she heard the door unlock, and swing open.

Toru Terkilla stood in the door, a glass in one hand, a rat in the other.

Marishka looked at the rat hungrily, reaching towards it to take it from Toru's grip. Toru threw it inside the house, blocking the doorway so Marishka couldn't get inside. "Their will be plenty of that latter my love, plenty of that, but for now I am glad you have arrived, with wings I see, I have been expecting you". Toru stepped outside handing Marishka her glass, stepping closer towards her. Licking her lips "I am so glad you could make it Marishka" Toru hissed, grabbing Marishka's waist, pulling it into a tight embrace. Licking her neck , she plastered a soft kiss near her ear, softly running her hands through Marishka's hair. Toru let her tongue slide into her mouth, wrapping her tongue around Marishka's.

Marishka could taste the evil in her blood as she sank her teeth into her lips, letting the blood be drained. Toru smiled, pulling away "Not yet Marishka , be patient my queen.

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  • Andy Stephenson Greeters member
    August 6, 2007
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    It's coming along

    I found this a little confusing and I gather that Marishka is a queen, but a queen of what? Corrections: P1 adjust, soulless, ripped, off. P2 answers, around. P3 locked. P4 gaze, until, there. P5 there, why was 'she' calling her queen, somehow, they, fascination, until. P6 view, P9 pulling her into a tight embrace'.

    Andy

  • Angie91
    August 4, 2007
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    WINGS...This makes it sound like an evil fairy's tale . I loved it .


  • k8fairy
    August 4, 2007
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    So intriguing! I love it! Awesome. Can I please have some more?