Rayne Walker

I sighed cause of another typical monday for high school. I always thought that if they would only understand who i am. stupid bullys. As I`m walking to school i hear foot steps behind me as i turn around ready to kick as hard as possible if it was jack the one that was nasty to me all the time. I smile when i see that its Jacob my boyfriend. Hey Rayne sup? Not much just want to get out of school and live a tyipcal life. We walked along as usual we walked in silence only noise was our foot steps and the distanct noise of a car driving by. as i arrived to school i looked up at the red bricked school. I walked in and went to my lockd when i opened it i saw a paper note inside it i opened it up and it said Rose`s are red Violet's are blue i have a gun targeted to shoot you in the head. From.....Jonson.My brother as usual does that alot. I grabbed my school text books ready to get to class first peroid math. I fell asleep as usual in math no point in paying attion.I felt a sharp pain in my head as i stirred in my sleep. I looked up to see my teacher saying wake up time to switch classes. I saw her give me a grin partically giving me a grin as in this was last time she would let me do that. Luckily i made it to gym. A i was running my last lap around the gym. Some bitch behind me pushed me stupid susan! I walked right up to her after gym and hit her one on the face. I got suspened for 1 month. I gather up my stuff and start to head home which is hell for me. As i head home my MCR ringone starts going off. I oponed my motralla razor phone lid. SEA DRAGON LADY. SHIT my mom damn it she must of heard about the fight. I gulped and answered. DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA WHAT YOU JUST CAUSED ME!! I started to answer her but relized i had no leg to stand with what i did. I just hung up i already get my ass kicked by her.as i got home. I relized the hell was going to begin.my mom walked into living room with belt and hit me on the arms with it 10 times. I had red marks and i tryed to dodge it but to late.i said sorry and i was telling her about what about what happened in gym but she didnt care.she never cared.GO MAKE DINNER NOW!!!! my mother said.i knew better then to say no.i went into the kitchen and made us dinner. My brother walked in and spit on me so i kicked him in the knee. he said MOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM RAYNE JUST KICKED ME. oh shit wrong choice to do. i started to explain but got another 10 hittings from her when she walked in kitchen.As i set the table i heard my mom say to my brother she was going to send me to the orphange.i all of a sudden felt scared.i didnt want to go there.i set the table.after dinner i ran upstairs and called my boyfriend and explained to him what was happing. he started to say that my mom shouldnt be doing this and that if i went to orhpange he would vist me everyday. I hung up after 10 mintues when i heard my mom say RAYNE COME DOWN HERE NOW!!!!i went down stairs to see her holding my report card from last week.i had gotten 2 F`s and 2 D`s she grabbed my hair and tugged on it making me cry and then let me go.she said THATS IT YOUR GOING TO THE ORPAGNE IN 2 WEEKS!i tryed begging and pleading no use. My brother tore all my stuff up in my room on my last day there. I was so sad leaving there but i didnt know the more bad it would be in the orpahgne..... TO BE CONTUIED.

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  • xxmomoxxx
    April 3, 2008
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    so, are you really 26? just wondering......nice story btw.


  • Dreams of Insanity
    August 28, 2007

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    Hmm I think this is a great beginning and I would love to read more, but the only suggestion I would make is to make paragraphs and quotation marks around the dialogue. Other than that I thought it was good.