Hand - Full moon stalker (Part 4)

Hand - Full moon stalker

(Part 4)

Marishka's body loosened up, as the house began to settle. The sun shining brightly again outside. Her house was trashed , Marishka felt sppechless. "This is going to cost a fortune" she thought to herself. The cloacked stanger held out her hand, touching Marishka's sleeve. "You must relax Marishka or your wings will never grow" The cloaked women laughed, pulling back her hood. "Wings" Marishka squecked, stepping away from the women.

"My name is Toru Terkilla, I am also known as queen in my parts of this town, you Marishka are very important to me, so you must listen to me for I will not repeat myself". Marishka steeping backwards again, loosing her grip on a pile of books, fell backwards onto some broken glass, cutting her arm. She screamed in pain as she pulled the glass out of her arm, sucking away at the blood. It tasted so good, she wanted more. It tasted evily dangerous, as she picked up another peice of glass, cutting her arm above her previous wound.

"I wouldn't do that if I were you, if you wan't to stay alove that is" Toru said kneeling down in front of Marishka, taking her arm away from her mouth. Marishka hissed, shaking her away " Why did you do that" she asked Toru, looking at her arm hungrily. "You'll suck yourself dry if your not carefull, then what will our world do without you".

Marishka looked into Toru's eyes. Her face was pale, her eyes dark, beautifully consuming her heart. She looked away, beginning to feel afraid.

"What do you want me for". Toru stood up, extending her hand for Marishka. "Take my hand and your awnsers will be revealed, in a short amount of time.Marishka still unsure shook her head " How do I know your not trying to kill me". Toru pulled her hood over her face, chuckling. "If I wanted to kill you, don't you think I would have done it by now, come on Marishka trust me, I have no desire what so ever to kill you".

Marishka stood up, fixing her clothes. "What do I get out of this". Toru grabbed her hand wrapping her fingers around her's " You will soon see my Queen".

*

Flashes of light filled Marishka's body, screaming she could hear screeching and moaning loud enough to deafen her. She felt like her whole body was about to explode. It reminded her of the stories of out of body experiances.

With a sharp sense of relisation she felt as though she wasn't going back. Eyes closed she waited for it to stop waiting for the moment it would end, sending peices of her body everywhere. She could feel her soul slipping out of her body, feeling drained and emotionless. The pain started to dissapear.She began to feel numb her heart cold, her blood still warm.

She opened her eyes, seing flashes of her life before her eyes. Memories even she could not remember. Then it went into an awfull darkness, she could see nothing, feel nothing as she just floated into a downwards spiral. Tears streaming down her face, soon froze, sending shivers through her veins.

Landing she felt her feet hit the hard ground, as a small white light shone in her direction. She closed her eyes again, feeling tired. her eyes drained, as she sunk into a heap on the ground.

"Marishka" a voice sang into her ear. She opened her eyes, feeling something poking from out her spine. The stranger in white pulling her to her feet, running her hands all over her chest. Marishka could feel the strangers cold lips on her chest, holding her tight. She looked towards a red light that now shone above her, as the stranger grabbed her tighter, biting into her. Marishka could feel herself falling again. closing her eyes, seeping into the darkness.

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  • Andy Stephenson Greeters member
    August 6, 2007

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    Interesting

    This was an interesting experience which Marishka went through. It seemed a little confusing in spots. Corrections: P1 speechless, cloaked, stranger, woman. P2 stepping, losing, evilly, piece. P3 alive. P5 answers P8 realization, disappear. P9 seeing, awful. It may be coming, but I think you need more explanation of what is happening and who Toru is.

    Andy


  • k8fairy
    August 4, 2007

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    Oh man I had a dilexic moment halfway through, not you at all, just for a moment all the words mixed themselves up in my head.
    I don't quite get what is happening at the end, but the marvels of getting to read your next chapter right now!
    I really like the part about being able to suck yourself dry, I think that is a really cool idea and kind of links with real life, which is so the best thing about using vampires and other mythical creatures.

  • Angie91
    August 4, 2007
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    I loved your description of Marishka's thirst for blood .