To Awnser - Full moon stalker

To Awnser - Full moon stalker

(part 3)

Marishka sat in the kitchen, twisting her card through her fingers. The hunger for blood, twisting and turning her insides.She wanted awnsers, but was she ready, ready for the truth. She must have killed the hungry girl. The evidence was their, only all that was left from the scene of her crime, was this card.

The original words had reapeared again, this time showing no sign of changing. She placed the card on the table, the phone lay in front of her. "Just dial the number" Marishka whispered to herself, picking it up. Toru Terkilla, what a name" Marishka thought running her hand across the bench.

She looked out the window. The sun had disapeared, in it's place dark clouds surrounded the sky. It looked miserable, but for some reason Marishka smiled feeling strangely at home. It started to spit outside, she could see the raindrops forming on the window. The house grew darker, the rain got heavier, as Marishka stood up stretching.

Her back felt sore, it ached as if some one was poking something into her spine. It was a sharp pain, as if she could feel it when the blood circulated around her body. It was as if her whole body had become cold and stiff. She tried to stretch again, but it hurt to much.

Behind her she heard a loud bang, trying to turn around she twisted her head as far as she could, looking behind her.The house began to shake, sending things all over the place. Glasses flew across the room, smashing into a thousand peices right in front of her. The book shelf fell, sending books all over the kitchen floor. The house continued to rattle and shake, as doors opened and closed, the contents of her kitchen scattered around her feet.

She slowly turned her head around, looking into the loungeroom. Standing right in the doorway, a dark figure in a cloak, laughed walking towards Marishka. She stooped right in front of her, extending her hand. "Toru Terkilla".

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  • Andy Stephenson Greeters member
    August 6, 2007

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    Good

    I guess that Toru is going to be explained soon, that's good. Only a few mistakes: P1 answers, there. P2 reappeared. P3 disappeared. It seems that the story is developing pretty well. Off to the next part.

    Andy

  • Neferen
    August 3, 2007
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    Lovely.
    I to like the window part.
    Keep on writing, loving it all.
    =3


  • k8fairy
    August 3, 2007

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    Oh beautifully descriptive about looking out the window, so lovely.
    its so short but you capture the moments so beautifully well, I think this is the best chapter I have read of yours yet, though nothing much happens, its amazing.

  • Angie91
    August 3, 2007
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    Its going on pretty well .