Fogged Posibility

I looked out the window and the world was one colour.

It was my first day of school
It was technology, meandering thought and blue grey awe
It was the moment before your first kiss
It was a jump or was it first flight?
It was the forever sky in an upturned cup
It was the question, never answered, seeking perfection and found
It was limitless possibility, limited by the confines of days that have passed.

It was.

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Waking up early makes k8 loopy.

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  • werner1221
    August 9, 2007
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    It was the question, never answered, seeking perfection and found. a classic line. this makes you think... anyways nice little ending.

    everyone always has to have a story where it takes the reader inside the author's mind. and it's always interesting to see what is there.


  • Im All Drama Queen
    August 5, 2007

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    ummm.....

    well it was okay, but it is not my favorate of all times. Well i am sorry if u think i am being mean but i don't like. I'm sorry


  • Prodigious.Mirth
    August 4, 2007

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    I don't know if it was meant to be funny... but I laughed.. it was colorfull and insightfull, I liked it... my favourite part was It was the question, never answered, seeking perfection and found