The Spade

So, Mr. Jung

You know me better

Can we dig further

When the "ground" is wetter?

Author notes

*Topic: A Shovel

If you'll allow me a little commentary, it's about self-exploration. The ground being wetter alludes to the ease with which we explore ourselves right after a tragedy.

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  • callthexylophone
    August 2, 2007

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    Loves it

    but why Mr. Jung?
    If it was... "Mr. someting personal, or brain or soul or mind or... self," it'd be more obvious, but also a bit corny, so just ignore me.