The Swinger in the House

Chapter one Scene one



It was a cold October night, on my way back home from gym. My body was dead, legs shaking and exhausted from the work outs. It was around 2100 hours when I hit the drive way f my house; I went in and took a couple of minutes to relax. Laid my head on a couch and I was gone lost into the world of the dreamers. A world of endless dreams; the time passed by quick, at least in my dream it did. I was deeply sleeping, muscles relaxing. Moments later I felt kisses over my forehead. For a minute I thought I was dreaming, but damn a good feeling shocked me, when I felt her hand inside my pants caressing my dick. The reality started to kick in, and my eyes wide opened focusing on the creature but, the creature made it feel so good that I didn’t even want to look at her again. She continued to caress me over, a twist to my nipples, and then she kissed my cock and then blew a cool air; that killed my heart and took me to a different level in life. She slowly rose up and then went down on my chest and sucked my nipples so hard that I almost passed out; then slowly she kissing me from my head down to my balls and a moment latter I felt her lips around my cock.







Chapter One Scene Two



She began to suck on it hard I even thought I was going to have a heart failure. I felt breathless, eyes rolling in and out, as she began to kiss my dick…and gave a cool blow, then she went down again and sucked it hard I almost came in her mouth, and damn she let it go. She began to tease and trying to please at the same time. A kiss and then a cool blow, a kiss and then a cool blow; she went on for quite sometimes. It was like thirty minutes into the action and neither one of us said a word; I was suddenly shocked when she screamed out “Oh big daddy give it to me, oh big daddy I want you inside me”, I began to wonder for a minute, who this creature was. Throughout this whole time I never thought to take a second or two to find out who I was messing with rather I went on with the flow. Well the voice sounded familiar, the touches and lips around my dick are somewhat familiar too. Curiosity got me wondering, and thinking. In my mind I was thinking about a lot of things, but mainly my next move. I lost concentration because the lingering feelings of wanting to thrust my dick inside her juicy tight pussy pushed me to worry not about the stranger, rather I pushed her up grabbed her and wobble her around for a second and then laid her down back against the coffee table.







Chapter Two scene three



She was a 5’10’’ tall. Carmel looking, she was an angel, smiles like sun rise. My heart felt like in a cone of ice when our eyes met. So innocent, she looked me in the eye and whispered a word I never comprehended. I tried to make her say it the second time, but her juicy pussy kept calling me for a thrust through. Without thinking twice, I kissed her all over, lips, cheeks, thighs and her ass. Damn that ass looked like a punpkin, more like a basket ball. Her nipples were frimly planted, quite tender. I began to caress her nipples and went down on her. I ate her like an ice cream. Slowly and gently I began to caress her pussy. It felt like the world was coming to an end; we had no time, so we gone 69. She was moaning like crazy; her eyes were turning red, she began to wobble my dick side to side in her mouth. She started to ejaculate me; her hands around my cock were firmly planted.







Chapter Two scene four


Her touches were like an angel touch, her kissed are breath taking, her looks takes you to a different world I called “Paradise”. She continuously went on sucking and riding me like crazy. I was on top of the world. I was tired of her teasing me and not pleasing me. I began to thrust my dick in and out as hard as I could because I was tired of the feelings of wanting to cum but can’t; I thrust her hard and hard she began to scream out loud, I honestly don’t know how long it has been since I last fucked that good, I mean her pussy was damn juicy and was tight; for a minute I couldn’t believe it was real but when the chill ran through my spine I began to rethink my thoughts over. The feelings were real, the thrusting was real, it was like an hour into the action as she moaned and screamed, yearning for more touches…she yelled out in a demanding voice…caress my clit….oh go baby I am coming…then a loud joyous sound came through with a strong hand grip to my neck pulling me in tight…she scratch me here and there… yes baby that’s what I am talking about….I was finally wide awake and now I was figuring out what was happening.






Chapter Two Scene Five


I was still between her thighs, her pussy was juicy...my dick was dripping juice…she went on and licked it off. She dressed my cock up with a vanilla flavored condom and began to suck on my cock again She put my dick back in its position…she pushed me off of her and on my back I find myself laying down, my hands were cuffed to the coffee table’s legs. A second went by as she went on thrusting my dick in and out of her mouth...the feelings were strong. I felt like shooting for ten more hours…but the brain was not functioning well to execute the mission…I was near coming after thirty minutes of her sucking my dick. She then pulled it out and went on licking my thighs and caressing my dick…..”Fuck baby I want more”….nipples….damn she is good…she went on teasing me. Finally she sat on top of me, riding me hard we both had multiple orgasms…then to her back she landed. Shivering, and breathing hard. To the ceiling we stared. Eyes turned to the same direction…I initiated the questioning. Damn girl what is your name angel? With a smile she replied and said Candy. You sure taste like Candy baby. Then I switch the light on, all of this time it was dimmed low. I had my red, yellow, and blue part lights on. With a bright smile she looked me in the eye and whispered something that I never comprehended. She was quite beautiful, attractive, and heat breaker. That night was one of the best nights, and definitely one of the best sexes I ever had.









Author notes

this is the new revised version of the original write. i hope you all enjoy reading this piece. It is by far one of my favorite pieces i have written. thanks to all of you who pointed out my spelling mistakes, and grammar errors. again hope you all enjoy this.

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  • kummie
    August 4, 2007

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    i was just trying to be helpful...please feel free to read my stories also...i am always open for suggestions...my apologizes if you took it wrong..


    • theburninglegend
      August 5, 2007
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      KUMMIE

      no i am not mad, and i aint taking it wrong in any way, i was saying that thank you for the comment and for pointing out my errors, i appologize if i didn't sound appreciative right there..but sure i will read your work and i appreciate you pointing out all of my slugish mistakes.....again thanks

  • kummie
    August 4, 2007
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    i agree with the sluggish comment...there were some grammar errors also...but a nice story...thanks for sharing

    beginning: 1, language: 1, plot: 2, ending: 3, dialog: 2, characters: 2.

    • theburninglegend
      August 4, 2007
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      true that

      yes i know the grammer was not the best, and yes there were some sluggish in the story..but i am still working on editing it...i only posted this up here so you can actially comment on it....but thanks though for pinting out all of my errors thats why i have it up...good looking..

  • Srinivasan
    August 3, 2007

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    wow

    It has got a very casual and sluggish opening and the pace hots up along with the tale narrated. I enjoyed it and all the best.

    beginning: 3, language: 4, plot: 3, ending: 3, dialog: 4, characters: 4.

    • theburninglegend
      August 3, 2007
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      SRINIVASAN

      i truly appreciate your comment and kind words..thanks for the support and for reading my piece....i just started writing erotic love stories recently and am working my way up. so more support and more visits to this page is appreciated...again thanks for you kind words...

  • Thabiso76
    August 2, 2007
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    incrdible

    beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 4, ending: 3, dialog: 1, characters: 3.


    • theburninglegend
      August 3, 2007
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      THABISO

      thanks my friend for the comment and the time spent reading my work....i appreciate that thanks...


    • theburninglegend
      August 3, 2007
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      thanks

      i appreciate your time and the opertunity given to show me how i did..thanks

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