Love is soured and bitter now
All imagined kindess gone
My heart is blackened, twisted
Author notes
This is my attempt at prompt 13- please be gentle?
A contest entry
- 20 Crafted Beauties by Asfand.
200 points, ended August 3, 2007, 16 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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be gentle....lolz...i really liked this, very straightforward and simple...
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very nicely crafted. i love the word choice. it flows well, and your poetry is certainly improving leaps and bounds. the best of luck to you in the contest!
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Thankyou for your kind comments- I'm glad someone as talented as you thinks my poetry's not quite as crap as I fear...
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