Kick me while im down

Poke at my eyes

Blind me so i cant see

Push me to the ground

I'm just another me

Kick me while im down

What does it matter?

Break my ribs

Feel them shatter

Pull at my hair

Rip it out

Keep jumping on me

No matter how hard i shout

Knee me in the stomach

It's alright for you

Spit on me

It doesn't bother you what you do

Walk off

Be the coward you are

Nothing can help me

Even if i wish upon a star

I thought i could turn to you

Whenever i was sad

You just proved me wrong

Like always, Dad

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  • Yi Yin
    August 2, 2007

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    oooooooooooooooook! Wow! Full of emotions, and a really good bang in the head for the last line. I thought it was going to be a good friend, but then you said, "Like always Dad." Now that's good!
    Good Job!


  • tinkerbelle2840
    August 1, 2007
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    This is my fav poem ever!!! Its kind of sad but I love it