Poke at my eyes
Blind me so i cant see
Push me to the ground
I'm just another me
Kick me while im down
What does it matter?
Break my ribs
Feel them shatter
Pull at my hair
Rip it out
Keep jumping on me
No matter how hard i shout
Knee me in the stomach
It's alright for you
Spit on me
It doesn't bother you what you do
Walk off
Be the coward you are
Nothing can help me
Even if i wish upon a star
I thought i could turn to you
Whenever i was sad
You just proved me wrong
Like always, Dad
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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oooooooooooooooook! Wow! Full of emotions, and a really good bang in the head for the last line. I thought it was going to be a good friend, but then you said, "Like always Dad." Now that's good!
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This is my fav poem ever!!! Its kind of sad but I love it




