In the garden
Underneath the sky
A silent congregation of
wooden splinters
A miniature banquet
Because she has no toys.
A contest entry
- 20 Crafted Beauties by Asfand.
200 points, ended August 3, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow oh sweet merciful goddess wow! I truly love this piece! So good!
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simple marvellow, loved this alot actually!!
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Delicate and fantastic.
After some entries I've read, this is refreshing. My interpretation is probably wrong, because 20 word poems don't warrant strict interpretations, but even in the light of my scrutiny it still stands beautiful.
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