Taylor the beautiful
If only he knew how beautiful she is.
If only he would look her way.
Then he would surely want a kiss
From the beautiful Taylor Renee.
She hides in the shadows afraid.
As she looks on at the guy,
That he surely would have made,
Taylor's world and time fly by.
As she sit's there alonein her room.
She thinks how canImake him mine.
The it hits her. Like a flowers bloom.
She can't make him love me.I'm fine.
So she goes to dance class.
Where she danced like a fawn.
As he looked in the window glass.
Saw her dancing like a swan.
As he goes to talk to her.
She is really amazed.
That he liked her dancing skills.
That he so acknowledged.
Taylor the beautiful.
Who danced like a swan
Was the happiest girl in the world.
With the guy of her dreams.
Author notes
Well I wrote off the topof my head. I also wrote this because you said you don't you'd get any so here's one..It may not seem good to you. But when I write poems I try to put feeling into them. So here's a poem I put some feeling into.
Taylor Renee is a beautiful contest princess and I worship her. The beautiful girl of the world.
Plus shes a dancer in my poem
A contest entry
- Poems Please ENTER ALL! by Taylor Renee.
450 points, ended July 30, 2007, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You are fantastic. Whoever you are.
First I'll do this sensibly.
This was a great poem (not thinking about me) and you wrote a great story in a small poem. That was great. I loved the way you wrote it, there was a great flow and it was just wonderful.
I love the end and the beginning...and everyhing in between.
Bu oh my! This was so sweet of you to write. Wow. Wow. Wow.
I got one! And this was so sweet...just wow. Thankies!!!
I really, really lovedm this entry. All of it. Great job. Good luck. Thank you so much for entering!
xoxo
Tay
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