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  The Process

I like to write to explore the situations I can't in real life. Reality is boring, why not create my own? The results have been improving over the years, giving me much joy in the process of relaying my thoughts to you, the reader.
Now, if only I could convince myself more often how enjoyable writing really is once you get down to it! Fear of failure is my worst enemy. My goal is to begin to increase the frequency that I complete works, face that fear a little more often. No more will I allow it to choke the creativity out of me!

 

My Comments

 I usually try to give the most detailed comments that I can. Sometimes, however, fatigue gets the best of me, and by the 7th missplaced (or absent) comma or the third change in verb tense, I just can't help but to give you a scathing comment about the failing grammar in the piece. This, quite simply, is because I have no constructive criticism to give when in such a mood. And while it would probably be best for me to leave no comment at all in this situation, I feel that if you've taken the time to write it, I should take the time to comment. For better or worse.

This changes when I am commenting on a series. By the third or fourth chapter, unless you are exceptionally excellent, my once paragraph-long praise will end up with a sentence or two on how I hope the story will turn out. This isn't an effective way to comment, I realize, but my priority is usually to get through your story quickly to find out what happens, not to leave you exceptional comments.

 

The Point?

That said and done, I hope you enjoy reading my stories! I will comment for comments, so if you ever want someone's critical opinion of your work, just read!

 

My Stories

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  • The Fridge
    Gerald almost didn't see the note as he thumbed through the circulars and magazines for house number 1074. Its stark whiteness blared again
    400 words, 9 comments, November 29, 2008. In , Comedy, Crime, Horror, Suspense
  • Got Rant?
    Has anyone else been irritated by the incorrect conjugations of "to have" floating around in our society (especially in the media) today?1
    300 words, 4 comments, September 29, 2008. In , Humor, Satire
  • Ambivalence (Unfinished)
    700 words, 2 comments, April 25, 2008. In Adult, Erotica, Lesbian
  • Frequency
    “What if God isn't always watching?” James asked.1 / The other children snickered in response. James wasn't quick like most of them were. I
    4100 words, 9 comments, April 24, 2008. In First person, Science fiction

My Poetry

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  • Not Guilty Anymore
    I let you take away my life
    Endlessly tormented by the guilt
    <100 words, 7 comments, December 29, 2006. In Abuse, Sad, Love
  • Big Brother
    War is peace and peace is warMore surplus into destruction pourTo defend against your victoryStagnate, your affinityAnarchy, swastika, freed
    <100 words, 12 comments, April 27, 2006. In 0, 11
  • Momma
    You are my friend, the one I created in my head
    You're the person I talk to when she acts like this
    <100 words, 3 comments, February 11, 2006. In 0, 0, 13

Guest Book

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  • First-Mate on August 10
    hello.
  • Rune Morose on January 26
    Ain't heard from ya since the other night. What's goin' on?
  • Rune Morose on January 16
    I'd just like to say,

    blargh

    although I believe I'm repeating myself many times over.
  • daftweejimmy : Fear of failure...... on September 30, 2008
    It's my familiar companion, no matter how often I throw rocks and curses at it! You are probably familiar with the aphorism that there's nothing to fear except fear itself. While this may not be 100% true in all endeavours, from the point of view of writing I can vouch for its validity.

    You may think that, coming from a stranger, this has little or no relevance, so let me assure you that your home page and the one piece of yours which I read and commented on gives me the very clear view that one of the things working against you is the high demand you make on yourself; perfectionism is both a blessing and a curse. It might be a help to look at your completed pieces and see the stages by which you arrived. By that I mean, where did you pause to consider, when did you break for coffee or whatecer, when did you re-read it to check for errors, all that sort of thing. It makes sense to have a sructured approach, to acknowledge present limitations, then gradually stretch them, yo accept the occasional failure as a part of the learning curve; but above all this, remember that there is actually no such thing as failure, just learning points on the road to your very best. i don't think i need to tell you to keep working at both your writing and your attitude towards it, i feel you'll master it without some old curmudgeon like me preaching to you! All the best,

    Jim

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