I started out writing stories at age six. However, I started poetry in third grade, and went completely over to poems in sixth grade, at the beginning of this year. I'm trying stories again, but they're pretty suckish, I've realized. I can only hope to improve.
My birthday's on July 30th!
I'm dying for critiques on my stories. It's fine if you dislike them, as long as you give some constructive criticism.
I like that word. Cri-ti-sih-zum. Criticism.
My birthday's on July 30th!
I'm dying for critiques on my stories. It's fine if you dislike them, as long as you give some constructive criticism.
I like that word. Cri-ti-sih-zum. Criticism.

- Member since December 9, 2008.
- My mood is
, and quote is "school... final exams... studying... living hell.". - I am a 12 year old girl from California (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm moon-mad..
- Visit my homepage at allpoetry.com/owlish






- I am in the groups Artemis Fowl, Going to Hogwarts, Harry Potter RPG, RP Hybrids, Young Authors
- I have 16 comments, 1 column, 471 poems, 24 stories, 5 journals
My Stories
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400 words, January 31
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1300 words, 1 comment, January 27
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1100 words, 1 comment, January 22
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Please don't scoff too much at my attempt at exciting action.1100 words, 2 comments, January 19
My Poetry
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it's a beeeeeeeeeeg little metaphor. makes no sense, lol.<100 words, February 9
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<100 words, 4 comments, January 30
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- Column: A Brief Guide to Better Roleplaying at allpoetry
Not a poem. Just look at the title and you will know all. I'll be adding things often. - Column: Story Setting - Fort Shaatha - Occupations at storywrite
Not advice on anything, which so far I think columns are supposed to be? Just story info. There's a lot of information about this one city, so it'll be in a few segments. Mostly for me to remember all the details. - Column: my friends. :) at allpoetry
my friends. not as in 'I like your poems,' but as in 'I like you/you and your poetry.'
My journal entries
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Today I got to skip school. It may be viewed as a festive occasion. But the truth is different. The thing I had to face today was so dangerous that I was allowed to eat Inn 'n' Out the night before and will receive another good meal afterward if all goes well. Actually, if it goes badly, I'll also get a good meal toFebruary 5, 700 words. → 7 comments, Add one?
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My sister was watching the TV and there is a tornado warning for my area! It seems kind like it's not related to me, but if the tornado really comes.... freaky. I really wish my house had a basement.January 23, → 4 comments, Add one?
