I started out writing stories at age six. However, I started poetry in third grade, and went completely over to poems in sixth grade, at the beginning of this year. I'm trying stories again, but they're pretty suckish, I've realized. I can only hope to improve.
My birthday's on July 30th!
I'm dying for critiques on my stories. It's fine if you dislike them, as long as you give some constructive criticism.
I like that word. Cri-ti-sih-zum. Criticism.
My birthday's on July 30th!
I'm dying for critiques on my stories. It's fine if you dislike them, as long as you give some constructive criticism.
I like that word. Cri-ti-sih-zum. Criticism.

- Last seen on Nov 8 12:25 AM. Member since December 9, 2008.
- I am a 11 year old girl from California (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm moon-mad..
- Visit my homepage at allpoetry.com/owlish






- I am in the groups Going to Hogwarts, Harry Potter RPG, RP Hybrids, Young Authors
- I have 14 comments, 459 poems, 15 stories, 5 journals
My Stories
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just a character I plan to use in a story...1400 words, June 30
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In which James is kidnapped and wakes in a strange place.1100 words, June 22
My Poetry
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hmph. I had an idea but I went away awhile and forgot it... ah, well. we must finish what we start, no?<100 words, 4 comments, July 2
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<100 words, 1 comment, July 2
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just a bundle of disconnected thoughts about my sister.<100 words, 4 comments, June 30
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- Column: my friends. :) at allpoetry
my friends. not as in 'I like your poems,' but as in 'I like you/you and your poetry.' - patchwork at allpoetry
Vague, sorry. - Hell on Earth at allpoetry
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My journal entries
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I am so bored. >. 1 Soooo, about me. 2 Birth name: Chloe C Chan Nickname[s]: N/A Birthday: July 30th, 1997 Age: 11 Ethnicity: Chinese/Korean American Role: Middle child, middle schooler, going into 7th grade [I'm in the middle of everything ] 3 Appearance: Let's see... I have a roundish face, wiJuly 7, 2,200 words. → 4 comments, Add one?
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pier 39. 1 I watched a man walk on glass. he told us it was how he supported his wife and son. of course, he could be lying. 2 I feel that I should draw great poetic inspiration from this. 3 maybe tomorrow. procrastination is comforting.June 27, 100 words. → 3 comments, Add one?
