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The story of Seilice's fine heroes, four acquaintances who find that they know how to reverse their planet's plague.
...Would someone please make me a better synopsis?
Note: If you came here to read the entire story, I'm sorry, but I have removed it. I will be reuploading it piece by piece as I edit it, so stay tuned!
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Can I cast an editorial eye here?
"a boy inhibited by the confines of his fate and his sister" - this makes it sound like Seven is inhibited by Evra and like Evra isn't actually part of the party. Plus you use the words "fate" and "black mist" twice in that second one-sentence paragraph. 
Fancy new banner, though - I'm jealous. Wish I had skills like that.
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Almost forgot - HEY YOU!! If you haven't been reading Shank's Disciple story had better start right now - you're missing out on one of the best stories on Storywrite.
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I made that blurb a while ago, and I haven't really cared too much to come up with a new one
And the banner's about half a year old now
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