Just my writings about children and adventure
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Shellee and Annaliss slowly snuck closer to each other. They watched as green slime oozed down Troleva’s arms, dropping off her fingers on4400 words, 12 comments, on May 19 2:37 PM 2006. In Childrens
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Trying to polish this up to send off. Any suggestions, spelling error or puncation mistakes pointed out are greatly appreciated. T -
Chapter Three: Sunken Ship1 / After a break and a quick lunch of fresh kelp, of which Ella had never tried, the little group picked themselves up and started off again.3000 words, 21 comments, on Jun 21 3:01 PM 2006. In Childrens
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3400 words, 18 comments, on Jun 30 5:23 PM 2006
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Chapter Five: To the Ship1 / Lying down on their stomachs they peered over the last sand hill. Looming darkly on the valley floor sat th5800 words, 14 comments, on Jul 4 4:07 PM 2006
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1800 words, 2 comments, on Jan 22 4:53 PM 2007. In Young adult
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hesitated, but squared my shoulders and drew in a breath. “Instead of standing directly under the opening maybe you should back up a litt1800 words, 10 comments, on Jan 31 1:48 PM 2007
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The wind slithered through bare, knobby branches of the ancient oak three. It’s limbs creaked and groaned under the weight of the harsh breeze. The steel gray sky added an ominous backdrop to the garish tree limbs / “
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