Old, unedited, Thrid person verson, I will delete these as I get the new verson up.
Crime, Humor, Mystery, Novel
Breife Discription: Palmer, a quite town located somewhere off the map. Not many people know of this town, and for good reasons, its full of Mages. Karissa dosen't know why being a Mage is so bad, though she can't conpaire, she's not a Mage. She's an Earth Gaurdian. Karissa,at the age of only 17, has already been dubbed as a mass murderer by The PPD Head detective Jennifer Shale's.But When Mages are turning up dead, with religous notes on the bodies, and symbles carved into there skin. The Ditectives hate for Magic, and Karissa, might have to be shoved aside in order for the PPD to stop this killer, before Palmer becomes a slaughter town.
Link to First chapter of new Verson: http://storywrite.com/story/352960
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“Mya, can’t we just order and leave, I prefer not to have to deal with Miss. Bitchy Pants this early in the morning.” Karissa grumbled.
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She’s angry, sad, and has powerful amount of Magick. Defiantly not the best mixture
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She picked up the picture and threw it at the now open door. It hit Shales in the head with a clunk.
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800 words, 5 comments, on Oct 13 2:58 AM. In Depression, Drama, Fantasy, Humor, Inspirational, Life, Novel, Unedited, Young adult
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“So, this killer is female, she hates Mages, and loves darkness.” Dylan broke in. “Sounds like Shales.”1700 words, 7 comments, on Oct 17 1:10 AM. In Crime, Dark, Depression, Fantasy, First person, Humor, Mystery, Society, Unedited
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He looked startled and worried all at once, it just threw her heart into more of a loop.1100 words, 9 comments, on Oct 17 10:30 AM. In Dark, Depression, Fantasy, First person, Humor, Life, Love, Mystery, Novel, Unedited
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1500 words, 6 comments, on Oct 19 5:36 AM. In Angst, Crime, Dark, First person, Humor, Mystery, Novel, Teen, Unedited, Young adult
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I’m a grown man; I shouldn’t be feeling this way, like a hormonal teenager. I should be scolding her for thinking, what ever she is thinkin
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“Demore, I have to say, you are actually sounding intimidating, but put more umpft into it, scare me. Hit me even.”
