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Blackfire

Neophor is a trainee at the Hawks Academy for Rangers, an esteemed institution.

On the Annual Hunt, a test that marks whether trainees join the Brotherhood or not, the trainees embark to find and slay the fearsome jinuangi.

But something else is present in the forest.

A dark entity.

And for Neophor - his life is changed forever ...

Note from Author: This is the possible beginning of my fantasy novel Blackfire. Please critique. Rip my chapters and words to shreds if you want to - tell me everything and anything you might or might not like. Give me all the help you can! I will be VERY greatful ...

• Blackfire [1]

  2100 words, 27 comments, on Jul 17 4:46 PM. In Fantasy, Fiction, Young adult
• Blackfire [2]

  2600 words, 12 comments, on Jul 17 5:17 PM. In Dark, Fantasy

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