A big thank you to all those ‘Critters’ who have helped so much by reviewing our work. The title has changed because the novel outgrew the original but most of the characters remain.
This is the beginning of the second draft so there is still work to be done. All comments and corrections are appreciated.
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“Last call for the ‘Dunkin’ run. Put your order in and your cash up, unless you want to make it till dawn on that dish water in the lou
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Crystal tears like tiny gems glistened on ivory skin beneath soft brown eyes. Childishly she sniffled and ran her hand across her nose; sma
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The little plastic bird struggled forth and the chimes only sang out twice; yet several hours had gone bye.
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Set close by the sidewalk, the gasoline smell from the automobile-jammed road lingered in the vestibule but no one noticed. New York City
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What had started out as simply an average weekday for Dr. Neil Harris, quickly became a reminder of how imperfect a man he was.
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Desk Sergeant Patrick Moran looked up at the sound of the doors swinging in. The weary frown that settled on his young face after seven hou
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The clock on the wall informed him it was ten after five; it was unlikely he would receive any further reports today. Joe Farley finished o
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